Development post – Group discussion and work-in-progress feedback
We will be exploring how people interact with spaces. We intend to focus on actions, movement, sensory experiences. In terms of technological constraints, we want to use five landscape shots, and within each landscape shot, we will take ten close up shots each portraying a different action from within the space. Each shot will be ten to fifteen seconds each. For example, we could include a landscape shot of a library. One of the close-ups could be showing someone reaching up to take a book from a shelf. This shot could then link to a close-up shot of someone reaching up to pick a flower from a tree in a park. We want to visually link actions within places to other places to portray how people interact with spaces.
The structure of our project
Feedback from class
Likes:
Idea
Explore the idea in many different ways
Gives us lots of options
Similar shots leading into each other
Different idea
Emotional
Sensory experience
Composing a version
Improvements:
Think more about how color could work into the assignment
How the audience will interact with the different spaces and how we plan to portray that interaction
Confused about how we will create it
What we can do for improvements:
Through our group discussion, we will not let color be one of our elements in the project. We are going to use action to explore the whole project. We are not going to plan how will audiences interact the space, like my reading post, said, the producer should think less and let the audiences think more about our project idea. We want audiences to relate to the project through how they interact with spaces, this will guide them in moving through the project. In terms of modularity, each video will function separately yet through visually linking videos of actions the project will also function as a whole. The project also responds to variability as the project will differ depending on the audience’s interests, as they will click on the video that interests them. I think it our project is multiple small-scale works and let the viewer play a role in our project, so the audiences will choose which direction of the work they will go, in another way, they are part of the work multiple screens show multi pieces work at the same time, so it still no linear. Articulation theory said each time the project has interacted with a different assemblage forms, each sum having multiple connections is necessary. Korsakow can make our work more effective. ( if we are watching linear, a filmmaker will make the direction of the work, the role of the use it, audiences will need to through the work, giving the time to let me into the work and chose the where they want to go next)
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