Some feedback my group received for our studio presentation was that there is a positive being  including collages and mosaics being a smart link to affection as love and affection are very fragmented feelings. Some feedback that linked to this comment was to gather other people’s material and perspective on how they see affection to really bring in the infinite to our list of how people express affection.  And through these multiple perspectives, embedding aesthetics to our fragments was another tip as it can bring a structured consistent type of stylised look to our project whilst showing many interpretations of affection.  A creative work example suggested by the panel which could help us was looking at the We Feel Fine directed by Adam Luxton, Jeremy Dumble as it is a film which shares similar components to a gathering list as it captures different emotions from various characters. Despite not watching the whole movie, I did watch the trailer and found that it had similarities with the creative work I presented which was Is Anyone Coming For Dinner by Audrey Lam as it also used shaky camera movements for a more intimate and personal tone to the film as the consistent use of close ups and cropped body actions just enough for the audience to understand what is happening. 

Some advice for using Adobe Spark as well as Hannah was to keep importing anytype of media into the platform to work intrusively as an interactive approach much like the processed based method in creating the video as mentioned in my initial ideas blog post as from then our group can let the content form around how we  organise it. Ordering our works of media on Adobe Spark I learned can also intentionally guide the audience in the way they interact with the works which can stem off providing or giving the viewers a prompt or question at first and then showing them our media works to contemplate the relationship between. Another idea mentioned was including the use of hashtags to accompany our work to create an infinite list where other online users’ understanding of affection can be brought in with our project.