Experiment 5: Satire

SKETCH 5

This week the comedy mode discussed was satire. As noted last week, parody and satire are often mistaken for one another or the same, despite their differences. While parody focuses on conventions, satire focuses on commentary – “where parody, as we have seen, draws on – and highlights aesthetic conventions, satire draws on – and highlights social ones”. (Neale & Krutnik, 1990). Satire aims to make commentary on a social issue, theme or event. This was seen in the show we watched in class, The Brass Eye. The Brass Eye utilises satirical comedy to poke fun at fake, or exaggerated news. It highlights that news agencies can pass fearmongering as legit and accurate information – “such a system of textual authority, built around claims to define reality by defining what counts as true and important, is a clear target for satire—understood here as art on the attack, to include both its aesthetic and its critical dimensions.” (Meikle, 2012). While the show utilises conventions of a typical news program, the real comedy is in the commentary on social issues (such as drugs in the episode in class). “The most effective satire blurs irretrievably the line between fact and fiction.” (Caterson, 2005).

The sketch created this week by our group, ‘Causing Cancer’ follows a news report on microwave radiation – we were all greatly inspired by Brass Eye. Our sketch is satirical because, much like drugs in Brass Eye, microwave radiation is an issue. Despite this, news agencies love to point the finger at what product will be ‘causing you cancer’, and greatly exaggerate the claim. The social issue being the fearmongering created by news channels for views and engagement on their shows. ‘Causing Cancer’ closes off the episode by introducing next week’s subject, how elevators cause you cancer. The sketch aims to blur the “line between fact and fiction.” (Caterson, 2005).

In this sketch, I learned about comedy’s relationship with non-fiction/informational programming. Specifically, the way they are constructed. The sounds, graphics, interviews and locations are all vital conventions to informational programming like news reports. Finding a way to make these conventions a part of our sketch enhanced the audience’s understanding of the style of satirical comedy we were creating.

 

REFERENCES

Meikle, G. (2012), “‘Find Out Exactly What to Think—Next!’: Chris Morris, Brass Eye, and Journalistic AuthorityLinks to an external site.“, Popular Communication, 10(1–2), pp. 14–26.

Caterson, S. (2005), “A Preposterous LifeLinks to an external site.“, Griffith Review, 8 (June 2005), pp. 186–192.

Neale, S. & Krutnik, F. (1990), “Definitions, genres, and forms” in Popular Film and Television Comedy. London: Routledge, pp. 10–25.

Experiment 4: Parody

SKETCH 4

This week we discussed the mode, parody. A parody is “considered to be a funny imitation of an artistic work that typically wasn’t intended to be funny.” (Toplyn, 2014). When we were talking about parodies, many shows and skits I had seen over time came to mind (like many SNL skits), it seemed to me to be a common and well-known mode. Parody, unlike theories such as the comic frame discussed in week 3, “has its own techniques and methods, but no particular form or structure.” (Neale & Krutnik, 1990). This means that, creatively, parodies don’t need to follow a particular formula – this mode felt more open to originality and creativity when thinking about what to create for our sketches. Parody focuses on “aesthetic conventions” (Neale & Krutnik, 1990), such as making fun of nature documentaries and infomercials. What makes a parody funny, to my understanding, is the audience’s knowledge of the subject being parodied. The “audience needs to be already familiar with what you’re parodying if they’re going to get your jokes.” (Toplyn, 2014). A parody of a true crime documentary may not be understood to be funny by those who have not seen a stereotypical true crime documentary. It is important to parodies to have the audience’s own context and understanding of the original content in order to find the most humour out of the sketch/show.
The media artefact created this week parodied a Zoom-style group presentation. After COVID, it is pretty easy to assume the audience is no stranger to this type of scenario, proving Toplyn’s argument of audience familiarity. As well as the viewers being university students & tutors, we are all accustomed to an awkward group assignment. Our sketch parodies the misunderstanding of a project by a group member, who must present their argument regardless. The sketch aesthetically replicates the conventions of a Zoom call (Neale & Krutnik, 1990), with random face zooms and awkward silences.
Because we didn’t parody a specific genre, this week’s sketch didn’t have much crossover with other forms/genres. Despite this, in the reading this week, it was discussed how parodies and satire comedies are often mistaken for one another (Neale & Krutnik, 1990).

REFERENCES:
Neale, S. & Krutnik, F. (1990), “Definitions, genres, and forms” in Popular Film and Television Comedy. London: Routledge, pp. 10–25.
Toplyn, J. (2014), “Parody SketchesLinks to an external site. to an external site.” in Comedy Writing for Late-Night TV, New York: Twenty Lane Media, pp. 239–261.

Experiment 3: Situation Comedy or Story Sketch

Theories of humour: The Comic Frame / Comedy Mechanics / Situation and Story

SKETCH 3

What is your understanding of the comic form and theories of humour explored this week, with reference to the reading(s), in-class discussion, and/or your own research?

The comedy theories/forms covered this week in week 3 were the comic frame, story sketches and humour techniques. From the reading ‘Comic Frame’ this week, I understand comic frame as humour that emerges from contextual elements, “the contextual cues leading the interpretation of a message is centrally important to how we make symbolic sense.” (Voth, B. 2014). This allows audiences to understand when things are meant to be funny which includes things such as jokes and puns (verbal), expressions (non-verbal) and absurd scenarios (incongruous juxtapositions). Comic frame seems to be the framework of what would make a media artefact funny to its audience. The other reading from the week, Toplyn, J. (2014), “Story Sketches”, helped me to understand how to construct a story sketch through his suggested formula in 9 steps.

This reading helped me to create the basis of my 3rd sketch.

How does your media artefact (sketch) respond to these constraints and concepts?

By following Toplyn, J. (2014),’s Story Sketches nine steps I was able to construct a sketch:

Think of a comic character with two or three exaggerated traits

CHARACTER 1: FRANTIC & UNORGANISED

Make your comic character want something

TO GET TO WORK ON TIME

Have someone oppose your comic character

A ROBBER

Have your comic character take several different steps to get what they want, each step more radical than the last

PLANNING ANOTHER DAY FOR THE ROBBERY TO OCCUR SO SHE’S NOT LATE TO WORK

Raise the stakes

THE ROBBER WANTS THE BAG NOW

Have your comic character do something really extreme

REFUSE TO GIVE THE ROBBER HER BAG

Have your comic character not get (or get) what they want

A NEW ARRANGED ROBBERY DATE

Throw in a final twist

IT’S A DATE DATE?

Add the dialogue

tick

(From week 2 onwards:) How have you incorporated peer feedback into your approach to further develop or improve your practice?

I tried to go a lot further out of my comfort zone on this one. I’ve never been good at writing scripts, particularly comedy (beginner) so this was a new one for me. This sketch was more creative and resourceful than my other sketches, aiming to improve as much as I can every week with the help of peer feedback and personal goals.

 

REFERENCES:

Voth, B. (2014), “Comic FrameLinks to an external site.” in The Encyclopedia of Humor Studies, Thousand Oaks: SAGE Publications, pp. 148–150.

Toplyn, J. (2014), “Story SketchesLinks to an external site.” in Comedy Writing for Late-Night TV, New York: Twenty Lane Media, pp. 221–238.

Berger, A.A. (2023), “The Semiotics of Humour: Universal Humour Techniques in Comedy WritingLinks to an external site.” in Audissino, E. & Wennekes, E. (eds), The Palgrave Handbook of Music in Comedy Cinema, Cham: Springer International, pp. 25–42.

Experiment 2: Silent Comedy

Theories of humour: Benign Violation / Relief / Silent Comedy

SKETCH 2

What is your understanding of the comic form and theories of humour explored this week, with reference to the reading(s), in-class discussion, and/or your own research?

As discussed in class and throughout the required readings, my understanding of relief comedy and benign violation relates to a “physical phenomenon of laughter.” (Morreall, J. (2009). Relief comedy, to my understanding, is described as a release of tension. When there is pent-up excitement or energy in the nerves, people will laugh to release it. Relief comedy is therapeutic and calming- it describes laughter as a form of medicine – relieving tension of suppressed thoughts and feelings. Benign violation rather, is “a psychological state characterized by the positive emotion of amusement and the tendency to laugh.” (Warren, C. & McGraw, A.P. (2015). The benign violation theory is a theory that helps us to understand why particular situations or jokes are perceived as ‘funny’. With both violation and benignity elements, comedy allows people to steer through social boundaries, challenge norms and find humour in harmless but ‘wrong’ scenarios. In class, we watched an episode of Mr Bean after discussing ‘silent comedies’, which were particularly popular in the early ages of film/TV. This viewing in class helped shape my Week 2 sketch.

How does your media artefact (sketch) respond to these constraints and concepts?

My week 2 media sketch responds to the benign violation theory in the silent comedy genre. Sitting at my desk, I begin to feel hot, I walk to my air conditioner remote on the bed-side table and turn it on, as I walk back to my seat, I am suddenly in a complete outfit transformation as if the season in my room had changed. The punchline is harmless, yet challenges ‘right’ social norms.

Framing was an important part of this sketch in making it funny. I ensured I had lots of small cuts, to both ensure the punchline was funny and unsuspecting as well as making it seem repetitive – a technique often used in silent comedies.

(From week 2 onwards:) How have you incorporated peer feedback into your approach to further develop or improve your practice?

My feedback for this week from a friend in class was to get a little more creative with my sketches and seem more open to trying more different things – getting out of my comfort zone. Although it was silent comedy this week, they suggested trying dialogue to enhance the sketches’ humour.

 

REFERENCES:

Warren, C. & McGraw, A.P. (2015), “Benign Violation TheoryLinks to an external site.” in Attardo, S. (ed), Encyclopedia of Humor Studies, Los Angeles: SAGE Reference.

Palmer, J. (1988/2018), “The Logic of the AbsurdLinks to an external site.” in Marx, N. & Sienkiewicz, M. (eds), The Comedy Studies Reader. Austin: University of Texas Press, pp. 51–54.

Morreall, J. (2009), “No Laughing Matter: The Traditional Rejection of Humor and Traditional Theories of HumorLinks to an external site.” in Comic Relief: A Comprehensive Philosophy of Humor, Chichester: Wiley-Blackwell, pp. 1–26.

Experiment 1: Sketch

Theories of humour: The Comic Event / Surprise / Incongruity

 

 SKETCH 1

What is your understanding of the comic form and theories of humour explored this week, with reference to the reading(s), in-class discussion, and/or your own research?

My understanding of the comic form and theories of humour explored this week (The Comic Event / Surprise / Incongruity) was largely influenced by the reading by Audissino, E. & Wennekes, E. (eds), ‘The Palgrave Handbook of Music in Comedy Cinema’. The reading introduced that defining comedy as a genre or mode was complicated – that theories on what makes us laugh or why we laugh have been debated over time. The main theories – superiority theories, incongruity theories, release theories and humour and ethics I found made the basis of understanding what makes comedy, comedic. Surprise and incongruity were the theories focused on in Week 1. Incongruity/surprise comedy includes elements that are juxtaposed or unsuspected to create humour. Absurdity and surprise are big elements of this comedic style, “the detection of some disruption of our expectations.” (Audissino, E. & Wennekes, E. 2023). The unsuspecting element confuses audiences and can create humour in the process. Knowing this, I tried to push these elements into my Week 1 sketch.

How does your media artefact (sketch) respond to these constraints and concepts?

My media sketch responds to the incongruity concept by adding this element of surprise. It is hard to predict what is happening next in my sketch, what is the present delivered at the door? Why are there Michael Jackson coasters? Is there anything in this package?

The element of surprise and absurdity was the key factor in the sketch, which I believe responded to the constraints of the comedic theories. I “create a deviation of norms, conventions, anticipations, predictions and common logic.” (Audissino, E. & Wennekes, E. 2023).

(From week 2 onwards:) How have you incorporated peer feedback into your approach to further develop or improve your practice?

I found this style particularly hard to do, I wasn’t sure what to come up with a ‘surprise’ element. I didn’t receive any feedback (Week 1) but I don’t think this sketch is particularly funny, I hope to improve on generating ideas that I’m capable of doing on my own. I am definitely not used to making comedy sketches.

 

REFERENCES:

Simons, S. (2023), “Six Small Essays About Comedy”, Humorism, <https://www.humorism.xyz/six-small-essays-about-comedy/Links to an external site.>.

Audissino, E. (2023), “From Dionysia to Hollywood: An Introduction to Comedy’s Long (and Bumpy) Road” in Audissino, E. & Wennekes, E. (eds), The Palgrave Handbook of Music in Comedy Cinema, London: Palgrave Macmillan, pp. 3–23.

A5 pt2 Studio Review – Uses of Photography

From your studio, reflect on an aspect of two other students/group’s media work on the website in terms of specific insights they produced about a key idea addressed by the studio? 

THE USES OF PHOTOGRAPHY

I really enjoyed this semester of media. Up until this point, I have done mostly film-focused studios, so I thought I’d switch it up and do a photography course. I learned a lot throughout the semester and hopefully take my skills and learnings to future studios.

“UNMASKED” by Jennifer Tang

The hybrid photo-film created by Jennifer Tang titled UNMASKED was a great project that I think represented the key ideas of our studio. Firstly, the project had a meaning behind it, the feelings and distress around social anxiety and the ‘mask behind the façade’. A big part of the studio was exploring the way multifaceted ways photography is created and displayed, and that it did not simply have to just be a portfolio of photographs. This project is in film format, with multi-media and has a soundtrack, which is not what you’d traditionally believe to be ‘photography’. This is why I think this project was such a great example of our key learnings throughout the course, the versatility and innovation surrounding the vast creativity of photography.

 “Melbourne’s Palette” by Jinli Axtens

Much like ‘UNMASKED’, Melbourne’s Palette expands out of what a lot of us understand as traditional photography and dives into the many ‘uses of photography’.  This project is also in a video format, as well as being layered out like a collage. What this work really highlights in terms of some of the key ideas of Uses of Photography is the way they have used editing to enhance picture’s colours and group them this way. Photography is not only about taking pictures, but the process of editing as well. I thought that this key feature was represented really well in this project.

 

Choose one other studio from this list (we suggest selecting a studio that you would not normally be interested in). Then describe a key idea that you think the finished media/studio work communicated with reference to two specific examples (i.e. particular individual/group works) – Please note the name of the studio and the name of the work

SHOCK! A NEW HORROR!

 “Lost In-Between” by Lucy Liu

Firstly, I want to say that I think this short film was excellently made. The camera quality, camera work, editing and everything is of really amazing quality. I loved watching it. What I really enjoyed about the film was the psychological thriller type of genre it follows rather than being the ‘gory’ and ‘jumpscarey’ horror film. It added another layer to the film because the story unravelled its plot as you watched, and it allowed for the audience to put the pieces together themselves. Since the studio was about creating horror movies through a contemporary lens, I think Lost In-Between did this perfectly. The film was set in a modern environment in a single-family household. I think the ‘issue’ for the main character Lily, is something that a lot of people can relate to – an absent parent and the trauma that comes with this. The storyline added the contemporary lens to the film, and while it was in the horror-genre it was not unrealistic or dramatized too much to fit in to the genre. I think it was an amazing film.

“The Newsroom” by Jasmine Gould

This short film was also really enjoyable to watch. Once again, the studios focus was about creating horror movies through a contemporary lens. I thought The Newsroom did this well by having a modern environment – such as a news reporting room. What I think this short film did really well was the narrative form. Through flashbacks and visions (a feature common in the horror genre), it allows us as an audience to engage more with the story as the narrative’s questions are answered by the change in timeline. Why was she so stressed about work? Who’s the politician? These are all questions that are answered when we watch the entirety of the film and piece things together.

Blog Post – Week 12 Self-Directed Photography Portfolio

Week 12

As I mentioned in Week 11, this is probably the happiest I have been with a final project so far throughout my media course. Photography has always been something very interesting to me, although I do not have much experience and are not very good at it. The project came out better than I originally anticipated, and I hope other people enjoy the portfolio too.

One key learning about your own photographic or broader media practice that emerged in the process of completing Assignment#4

In the process of completing this Assignment, one key learning experience that emerged was how important planning was. I was so grateful I gave myself enough time to edit everything, as it was definitely the most tedious process for my chosen project. I think normally I would leave the editing and finalising the least amount of time and it often meant that my work was good, but there was always something missing. Because I was able to properly plan out and get the starting stages of this project underway quickly, it meant I did have that extra time to perfect things I wanted to perfect. I learnt how important the editing process is in the photographic practise, and how much it adds to the final product.

If you had an opportunity to repeat the Assignment 4 project what is a key thing you would do differently to improve the final outcome (and what reason stopped you doing it in the first place)?

I think I would focus more on maybe an issue or concept. Although my project does have some social commentary, I don’t think it is a very strong commentary. Reading my feedback, I realised that maybe that was what was the drive for a lot of the projects, and mine didn’t seem as clearly to have an ‘issue’ that it focused on. If I were to have an opportunity to improve the final outcome, I think I could have some more political commentary – maybe some more text or images that convey the commentary. As well as this, I think I would also have used better lighting. Although I did edit the pictures in Adobe Lightroom, I wasn’t able to fully fix the lighting, which was obviously a mistake I made during my photography. If I had shot with better light I think both the photographs would have come out better as well as made the editing process a bit smoother for myself.

What core photographic concept/idea encountered during the 12 weeks of the studio (in readings or class discussions) has had the strongest impact on how you will approach photography in the next year?

The photographic concept that stuck out to me the most was in Week 5. That week, we spent the whole class experimenting with different lighting techniques. Although I probably won’t use a soft-box lighting kit in my personal life, the experimentation of different lighting techniques gave me an entirely new perspective on how lighting creates different effects. I had never used lighting gadgets before, so this was definitely a turning point in regard to my photography learning. I hope to learn more about photography over the next year as I have really enjoyed this course.

Blog Post Week 11 – Self-Directed Photography Portfolio

Week 11

Week 11 of my project proved to be an exceptionally demanding period to bring all the pieces of my creative project together. At this stage, I had successfully completed the photography phase, and my next critical step was my most feared part of the process, the photo editing and putting together my digital book. Unfortunately, it was not a seamless process; my laptop experienced malfunctions (I had to get it fixed), which caused me some downtime and frustration. Photoshop, my primary editing tool, presented its own set of challenges. I found it very difficult and tedious to remove backgrounds, change lighting and overall work around Photoshop and my editing went through many stages.

As my main goal of my project, it included me having to come up with descriptive and witty text around the photographs of the bags I had taken pictures of. This was a tedious task, and it took me many days to figure out what to say. I had to make the design aesthetic and copy the distinctive 2000s magazine style while also trying to make a social commentary on gender stereotyping and sexism in the modern era.

My favourite part of the week was once I had gotten all my Photoshop and Adobe Lightroom editing finished and I had typed up all the text, I was able to put it all together. I loved experimenting with how to make my portfolio look the best I could while staying as close as I could to my inspiration. I used Canva to put all of it together into my digital book. The design went through many phases throughout the week until I was finally happy with the result. Although the editing process was definitely the most challenging for me, it was also the most rewarding. Putting everything together and seeing all the work laid out, this is probably the proudest I have been throughout my media course so far of a final project. Although I’m sure there is a lot to improve on, I am proud of what I was able to complete and how it ended up.