In the lead up to the final presentation of our prototypes, the three videos, logo design and website design, the Men’s She group worked to re-fine each one of them.
Rizki got feedback from Pete in cleaning up the Brimbank Men’s Shed logo and Seth assisted myself and Matt to finalise the video of the 2 minute cut, 30 second and 15 second variations. Seth also assisted with the structure of the 4 minute Documentation video presentation.
Changes that were made to 2 Minute video:
Introduction – Call to action:
Split interview:
Originally “suicide” topic was included in this sequence but was re-arranged to later in the video. It is more appropriate this way.
Additional interview footage:
To avoid potential ethical issues of dialogue being connected to the wrong person, Seth explained dialogue must be associated with the person speaking it. Interview footage replaced some of the cutaway footage.
New information text #1:
Seth brought up the idea that, people don’t like seeing things that have been around for a while ending. This is true and therefore this text was changed to emphasise that.
New information text #2:
To appear more direct and immediate, “closed” was used as opposed to discontinued
Ending:
Now split up into to slides to be more clear.