Write, Shoot, Edit: Assignment 2

Video Access and Rationales

Uncomfortable_Filmmaking_Short1_Jaden Arendtsz.mp4

Our first video revolved around narrative subversion. We subvert narrative by taking the common plot device of ‘inner monologues’ and twisting it against it’s conventional usage in cinema. Typically in cinema the inner monologue is a convention used to show the “true thoughts of a character”, (Bordwell, 2015). Playing with this idea of inner and true thoughts we thought that a creative way to subvert narrative and audience expectations would be to present regular dialogue in the form of an inner monologue. According to Bordwell inner monologues most evidently show that they have not been spoken. This is most commonly done by not showing the actors lips moving while still hearing them talk. Since we chose to film using POV shots, for most of the film we never see our characters’ mouths move. However, we altered the audio by adding reverb and echo to differentiate it from regular dialogue and communicate to audiences that it wasn’t being outwardly spoken. Our film ends with an unexpected ending where the POV switches and you are able to see what appears as the inner monologue that has been consistent throughout the film, yet you see the characters mouth moving and outwardly saying every word, confusing the audience as the common convention for inner monologues is broken.

Uncomfortable_Filmmaking_Short2_Joseph Barclay.mp4

Our second video concentrated on subverting cinematography through using a range of different shots that utilised several conventions seen in the horror genre, to ultimately overturn the audiences expectations through an underwhelming climax. The concept was to depict a potentially harmful or scary situation between two characters to then have an anticlimactic ending or genre change. Essentially, our film is about a girl walking up to her friend and having a conversation, however our subversion creates a sense that she is going to hurt him through using alternate genre tropes and norms. Throughout the film, the main techniques we applied to recreate the horror genre were lighting, as well as camera angles and movement. We employed dark and gloomy lighting as well as shadows are commonly seen in this genre and is able to easily cue the audience into recognising and identifying our themes, light is able to ‘make objects, people and environments look beautiful or ugly, soft or harsh, artificial or real’ (Chandler, 2001). Low and high angles, zooms, hand held camera movements, close ups and tracking were all shot elements that we used to portray horror. Although editing wasn’t the technique we were attempting to subvert, it went hand in hand with our concept. The editing process involved adjusting colours, adding sound effects and slowing clips down to enhance our disruption cinematography film norms.

Uncomfortable_Filmmaking_Short3_PhoebeHewertson.mp4

For video three, we focused on subverting continuity editing, and editing conventions in film generally, employing a broader genre of Comedy. The comedic effect is in the stripping away of a story that is built up through performance and around in-camera transitions, and then is dismissed through a cut to behind the scenes. We aimed to make the short aware of itself as a form of comedy and achieved this through a break of the fourth wall; the viewer can watch the fictional narrative play out, the criticism of it, and the behind the scenes of the filming, all in the one video. Conventionally, editing is employed to be continuous, this is done through “matching screen direction, position, and temporal relations from shot to shot”, serving to clearly provide a continuous narrative (Bordwell et al. 2020). To subvert these conventions we chose to not adhere to temporal continuity, the 180 rule, or aligning eyeline levels. Additionally, we did not have an establishing shot, as well as the evident colour grading to differentiate the stories, the addition of sombre music over the fictional sections, and an awareness of the genre through a voiceover and general distortion of the audio and speed.

Bibligraphy

Bordwell, D. (2015) 1932: MGM invents the Future (Part 1), Observations on film art. Available at: http://www.davidbordwell.net/blog/2015/03/08/1932-mgm-invents-the-future-part-1/ (Accessed: 25 August 2023). 

Bordwell D, Thompson K & Smith J (2020) Film Art: An Introduction, 12th edn, McGraw-Hill Education, New York.

Chandler D (2001) The ‘Grammar’ of Television and Film. 

 

 

Editing, Continuity and Coverage

Continuing with our group, Jaden, Joey and I explored editing this week, from our footage on cinematography/performance last week. The issue is we didn’t create this video with editing in mind so we kind of messed up there, but I still think it’ll work out. Hopefully. We did do in camera transitions when shooting it and I have a plan to pause the video and insert a voice over, so some post-production elements will play into making it subversive in it’s editing.

The hard thing for me is how much these topics overlap, how cinematography plays into editing and editing plays into narrative, etc. I suppose the point is to focus on the one element and for the others one’s to not takeaway from or overpower it. I do think I had higher expectations for the pieces we’d be making but it’s hard with setting accessibility, time constraints and differing ideas, as well as the fact that we’re acting in our pieces and that feels like it immediately subtracts value from the video. But that’s just me being pedantic.

I am looking forward to seeing the end results, and I feel that we have clear understanding when it comes to thought behind our videos, and that’s important, it will also make writing the 200 word blurbs easier. I’d like to continue with this group in the future to make bigger productions, I think we work well in enabling each others ideas as well as morphing them together to make new ones. There’s no creative clashes or lack of contribution, I am thankful for that.

PEACE OUT

Cinematography, Lighting and Performance

On Tuesday, Joey, Jaden and I grouped up to explore cinematography and how changing that shifts viewer reactions. We tried obscure angles such as dutch angles and shooting a dialogue scene from the perspective of the persons feet. We also shot a dialogue scene where the person talking was not the one being filmed, and it was solely on the person reacting. We compared a stagnant camera with a moving camera. All of these effects seemed silly in production, I’m not sure if it’s the fact that it’s a humorous thing to do or that we’re not professional actors and anything we do likes objectively a bit silly. I like the concept of using cinematography to shoot something comedic, alike The Office, but that be more form than cinematography? But again it’s more so the camera movement that allows you to see the humour, so maybe it is cinematography. I’m still struggling with creativity around this “uncomfortable” concept, but to be honest I’m already uncomfortable with the fact that nothing seems high quality or creative enough so maybe I’m doing the right thing… I’d just like to create some work that feels significant? Or at least successfully subversive. We’ll get there.

Anywho, we decided to keep the same group for Assignment 2, so on Thursday we explored these concepts further and with better equipment and more planning. It’s nice to have other peoples ideas and skills when creating this sort of content, so I’ve enjoyed the collaborative element. We began planning for our 3 videos on cinematography/performance, narrative structure and editing, starting shooting first for our cinematography video. We chose to shoot a creative POV-esque piece, with the camera acting as the person. I think this is a funny way to approach cinematography, so I suppose the subversive element is there, but it does have its downfalls. Such as, with the mic on the camera it messes up the audio when the camera pans away, however this could be solved by using a lapel microphone and matching the audio, so hopefully we’ll look into that for next week. Additionally it does make transitions stunted, which also creates room for discomfort if we chose to go down that path. It is hard with the time limit and our acting skills but I am looking forward to seeing what we come up with. For narrative structure, we’re looking at exploring my previous idea of a backward’s story. So mixing up the timeline and starting the film at the end, then going backwards but leaving room for plot holes and interoperation. This one excites me the most so hopefully we can pull it off.

How to get uncomfortable?

Over the course of this weeks tutorials, and through the reading, we’ve focused on learning the rules of scriptwriting and analysing film form (formal expectations, conventions and experience, form and feeling, and form and meaning). This knowledge is intended to help us when it comes to making content, being that knowing the rules is the pathway to being able to break them. I do feel a bit creatively bound by these conventions though. Having had explored them so thoroughly in Cinema Studies, as well as a general lack of ideas and inspiration when it comes to creating fictional videos, I am having a hard time conceptualising content. And even when I do come up with ideas, the size of the project seems unattainable and I find I am lacking an achievable mindset; that is, an acceptance that whatever I make will not be a creative, award winning, life changing masterpiece, screened in Cinema Nova for masses*. C’est la vie.

On another note, ideas for assignment 3 & 4;

  • Short film begins with stagnant dialogue scene, maybe a dinner scene? ROmantic candles
      • get into argument, normal just talk
      • some short of climax
      • that resolves to a silent or orchestra track sequence of photos
        • maybe film photos
        • colour? b & w?
        • shows progression of argument
        • difference in setting, position
        • cuts in time???
      • dunnnnno how it ends or what the photos depict
  •  film backwards
    • (someone falls down stairs at end of film but thats beginning of dream sequence)
    • some sort of dream sequence, argument
    • dream sequence ends with person at bottom of stairs
    • and then shot of falling down stairs: in different colour?
  • day in the life literally, no soundtrack, nothing special
    • linear day
    • emphasising points of anxiety
      • showing fidgeting
      • through loud breahting, shaking
    • never really show narrator, solely pov
    • until bathroom scene look in mirror and try to calm down in social setting

* Yet (humble beginnings).

Plot Segmentation of About Time

About Time 2013, directed by Richard Curtis | Film review

Source: About Time (Universal Pictures)

Here is a Plot Segmentation of the 2013 film About Time by Richard Curtis. I wasn’t quite sure how to define the differing sections of the film so I went by significant (ish) plot points. To be frank, I do not know if I did this properly, it feels rather in depth and non specific so I may have not done it correctly. Though, here it is;

C. Credits 

  1. Introduction of setting and characters

a. Characters are introduced by Tim narration.

b. Home setting of Cornwall is set up.

     2. Tim’s desire to find love is set up as life goal

a. New Year’s Eve party where Tim regrets not kissing Polly.

b. New Year’s Day James tells Tim that he can travel in time

c. Tim tries out his new skill and goes back to New Year’s Eve to kiss Polly.

d. New quest to fall in love, using time travel.

     3.  Summer 

a. Tim forms an obsession with Charlotte.

b. Tim trials his new skill to try and create a relationship with Charlotte; his dad is aware of such time travelling.

c. Tim discovers time travel can not make someone like you.

d. Charlotte leaves for London.

     4.  Tim moves to London in search of girlfriend

a. Tim lives with Harry.

b. Tim meets Rory at his new job and they become friends.

c. Tim is unexpectedly lacking a love life.

     5.  The night of the blind date

a. Tim meets Mary in a meet-cue and it goes successfully.

b. Tim goes home to find Harry’s play flopped on its opening night, and travels back in time to fix it.

c. Tim discovers travelling back in time has deleted Mary’s number from his phone.

     6.  Tim’s quest to meet Mary again: The Art Gallery

a. Tim waits around at the Kate Moss exhibition for a week, hoping to meet Mary.

b. KitKat — who has moved to London — waits around with Tim and finally Mary arrives with Joanna.

c. Tim messes up the first interaction — as Mary does not remember Tim — and tries to talk to Mary again.

d. Tim ends up having Lunch with Joanna, Mary and Mary’s new boyfriend Rupert.

     7.  Tim’s quest to meet Mary again: The Party

a. Tim travels back in time to ensure Rupert and Mary don’t meet.

b. Tim succeeds and goes on a date with Mary.

c. Tim stays the night at Mary’s and reattempts sex multiple times until its sufficient.

     8. Tim and Mary happily date

a. Sequence of day to day life, mainly in London Underground.

     9. Tim meets Mary’s parents

a. Unprepared meeting, minute stress period.

b. It goes well with one trip back in time to resurrect Tim’s image.

     10. Tim goes to the theatre with Rory

a. Tim sees Charlotte and attempts multiple times to interact with her unsuccessfully.

b. Tim decides to leave without talking to Charlotte.

c. Charlotte bumps into Tim coincidently and they go out for dinner, he walks Charlotte home and has the opportunity to go inside her apartment but instead runs home to Mary.

     11. Tim proposes to Mary

a. Mary accepts his (second) proposal.

     12. Mary and Tim go to Cornwall

a. Mary meets Tim’s family and is immediately accepted by them.

b. Tim bathes in quality time with his dad.

c. KitKat is also in Cornwall after struggling in London.

d. Mary and Tim tell the family about the engagement and additionally that Mary is pregnant.

     13. The wedding 

a. Back in London Mary and Tim promptly decide wedding arrangements.

b. The wedding is held in Cornwall at a church, with nonconventional music and terrible weather.

c. The weather sends everyone into the family home in which Tim incessantly travels back in time to pick the best best-man after they all struggle with their speeches.

d. Finally landing on his dad to be best-man, James delivers a heartfelt speech.

e. Happy families at wedding.

     14. Mary gives birth to Posy

a. Tim discovers he should no longer travel back in time, since the birth of Posy.

b. Tim and Mary move houses to have more room for children.

c. Tim ceases to time travel because he loves his life.

     15. Posy’s first birthday

a. Friends and family all attend Posy’s first birthday party.

b. KitKat is late.

c. Jimmy arrives and informs Tim that he and KitKat had an argument and she drove away drunk.

     16. KitKat gets in a car accident

a. Tim mitigates the accident by travelling back in time to pick her up before she gets in the car.

b. KitKat attends the birthday party.

c. Mary and Tim acknowledge KitKat isn’t well.

d. Tim goes to Cornwall to see KitKat and attempts to fix her life through time travelling back to the first New Years Eve where she met Jimmy.

e. Tim and KitKat successfully change the past, they return to real time to find KitKat is in love with Jay, not Jimmy.

     17. Tim returns to London.

a. Posy is no longer a girl and he is met with a different baby.

b. Tim travels back to the birth of Posy to talk to his father and learns that he can no longer travel past the birth of Posy.

c. Tim rewrites New Year’s Eve to how it initially was and KitKat gets into the car accident.

d. Tim and Mary wait around with KitKat in Hospital to ensure she discovers how to get better; encouraging her to date Jay.

18. Tim and Mary have another child

     19. Tim gets a call from his mother to say his dad is unwell.

a. Tim, Mary and Posie go to Cornwall and discover James has terminal cancer.

b. Tim spends quality time with his dad, talking about the secrets of life and time travel.

20. Mary and Tim return to London

a. Tim lives each day twice; once normally and a second time to positively revel in it all.

b. James dies and the family returns to Cornwall for the funeral

     21. Tim must chose between having another child and continuing to travel back in time to see his father

a. Mary falls pregnant.

b. On the night of her labour, Tim travels back to see his father one last time and they travel further back in time together to when Tim was a child. They do not change anything and Tim returns to his life and newborn.

22. Life returns to normal, the story resolves

a. Kit Kat becomes a mother.

b. Tim strives to be the best dad, partner, and person by no longer travelling in time. He lives everyday as if it was the final day of his life.

c. Tim has learnt from his father and time travelling experiences to be happy with his ordinary life.

   E. End credits 

There you go, in her extraordinary length. C’est la vie.

Lynch’s Creative Child

Mulholland Drive Anniversary: David Lynch's Film Still Puzzles At 20

Source: Mulholland Drive (Universal Pictures)

This week we explored movements in time and history but also ways to categorise filmmaking, those being: Realism, Modernism, Postmodernism, Surrealism, and Post Postmodernism/Metamodernism. I liked conceptualising the differing lenses to view and create subversive films through, and how these shift over time periods. Also, ways in which these styles could be recreated, to be subversive in form. I like the concept of extra-textualism within Post Postmodern films and how they are self reflexive; I think this is a topic I want to explore. Additionally, the idea of form and how differing forms can combine in a single film is something I want to experiment with.

On Thursday, we watched Mulholland Drive. This was my first time watching the film and I left the cinema perplexed, unsure of what I had just consumed. I felt tightly manipulated (enthralled) by every moment of Mulholland Drive and enjoyed it even though it imbued me with a feeling that I was not smart enough to understand the point of the movie. Watching the explanation of the David Lynch’s 10 clues about Mulholland Drive in class was really helpful for me to understand some sort of linear plot, one that I had not thought of myself nor researched online.

Watching films as impactful as Unedited Footage of a Bear, Monty Python, and Mulholland Drive does make me feel uniquely incapable of ever making a film that actually has an effect on the audience. Nonetheless, I’ve enjoyed watching them. Mulholland Drive being my favourite of what we’ve explored so far, and I look forward to watching it again, with these new concepts and explanations to view the film from new lenses.

I enjoyed the way in which people resonated with Mulholland Drive because of how it acknowledged and elicited a sense of anxiety, or explored a personification of deep, negative emotions. This has sparked ideas of how I could be explore this in a low-budget, documentarian sense. Such as doing a long take, or day in the life sense, video, lacking non-diegetic audio and just exploring real human emotions. This plays into an extra-textual understanding in film, and that this would only resonate with people who have experienced such feelings through similar symptoms (maybe???).

 

“Well, I didn’t vote for you.”

Monty Python - "I didn't vote for you!"" iPad Case & Skin for Sale by Pelloneus | Redbubble

Monty Python and the Holy Grail subverts narrative conventions and pushes the viewer to constantly question what is coming next. The film cuts between storylines, time periods, animation styles and builds climaxes that meet resolutions that rapidly discard the work and time that built said climaxes. Mittell (2004) deduces that Monty Python’s style can be defined by it’s “narrative complexity”, that is, the group’s desire to create films that subvert popular narrative formulas. The group utilises satire, absurdity and comedic techniques to deconstruct established and popularised narrative conventions. Namely, the film uses anachronisms to accentuate its satirical intent. Characters constantly oppose the apparent historical setting by engaging in modern debates, such as constitutional politics in England: “Well, I didn’t vote for you” (Monty Python and the Holy Grail 1975). Additionally, a second story is set up alongside the Knights of the Round Table’s quest for the Holy Grail, that in which a Historian is murdered whilst reporting on the life of King Arthur. This discrepancy between narratives ensues a sense of unreliable narration, one in which the viewer is now unsure of the setting and time period of the Knights existence. The entire film works towards the Knights goal of attaining the Grail — a quest in which materialises to finally resolve as the troops rally to storm the island that supposedly holds the Grail — yet at the peak of audience anticipation, the two timelines finally collide to foreclose a seemingly unsatisfactory conclusion. Through narrative complexity, Monty Python and the Holy Grail subverts viewer expectations, thus amplifying viewer engagement by way of keeping the viewer on their toes and second guessing everything (until an abrupt ending ties most loose ends).   

Sources 

Gilliam T and Jones T (directors) (1975) Monty Python and the Holy Grail [motion picture], EMI Films, United Kingdom.

Mittell J (2004) Genre and Television: From Cop Shows to Cartoons in American Culture, Routledge, New York and London.

Reflecting on Weeks 1 & 2

The first weeks of the uncomfortable film studio have not been what I was anticipating, that is to say I’ve enjoyed it more than I thought I would. I’m mainly excited to start creating my own content and exploring the depths of uncomfortability in film making, and what that means to me. I liked the subversion of Monty Python and the Holy Grail more so than Unedited Footage of a Bear, probably because of the humour element in the former rather than the perturbance caused by the latter. As of yet, we’ve explored ways in which to create discomfort in film, may that be through content, cinematography, performance, lighting, editing, sound, or form. We have also touched on genre, expectations and was in which to analyse films more critically. All establishing points for this course as a whole and for the rapidly oncoming assignments. I look forward to creating uncomfortable content as it is not something I would lean towards or strive for ordinarily, so it will good to get out of my comfort zone and explore with the first assignment. Questions I have would generally be around intent: what motivates people to make uncomfortable or subversive content and therefore what will motivate me, especially since it’s something I have to be doing academically? Looking forward to finding out…