Asha Carrington:
1) Found footage matches the characters personality, lively narration with a story that had a climax and conclusion.
2) Outside shot possibly less bright and more saturation to bring out the color and life of her performances. More close ups on interviewee.

Aine Hamilton:
1) A nice simple use of found footage that interacts with that the narrator was discussing.
2) Parts of interview were slightly over exposed (higher f-stop) possibly less natural light and more use of an interior set up so that you have more control.

Stella Cooper:
1) A very good mix of overlays and narration, this fitted together quite well and added color, life and adventurous into the piece. Good to see the themes clearly layered out within the piece.
2) The Audio was slightly over amplified thus the gain needed to be lowered and possibly the audio equalized. The audio for the music also needed to be slightly lowered so It didn’t interrupt any of the narration.