In class this week we had a look at all our rough cuts and were getting ready for Assignment 1 submission. After watching all of my classmates’ preliminary edits I obtained valuable comments for my own rough cut from Cat, our studio leader, and Spring. Because of this feedback, I realised that my edit lacked the teaser elements required by the Assignment criteria, and instead just resembled an edit with music. I decided to rework my edit in order to create a better version that is more like a teaser. I’ve improved my usage of music, foley, and sound effects. I was able to make the editing much more engaging and intriguing by combining Boom, Braam, cymbal, and other sound effects, which aim to elicit excitement from the audience. I believe it now fits the requirement of the assignment criteria and appears. more like a teaser as well as more cinematic.