This week, we aim to accelerate our writing process to finish the script before Friday. We appreciate Brendan for the helpful tips and sincere insight into our writing drafts. He advises us on which idea might be off the hook and not standing out at the punchline. He also emphasizes the importance of setting up the premise before the jokes so as not to get the jokes slightly off. Moreover, he also suggests revising the satirical elements. We also ask if our attempt is a parody of spy movies as we poke fun at the spy figures with Agent Wyte’s character. Once again, thanks for your clarification, Brendan. As long as we do not imitate the look of any specific movie totally, we can get away with inspiration. We solve the satirical problems by inserting Whyte’s appearance on the street and how she gets dozed off with the satirical problems in modernity: the tram, the vape, the protest, and TikTok. Once again, it presents a challenge: Does all the scenes make sense when they are grouped? Each one of us had written separate establishing scenes for the modern world. Yet, once we finished them, we would correct them one more time to make sure they matched the bigger events in the story. Moreover, we are confronted with the timeline challenge of dividing the scenes’ length appropriately into 10 minutes. One relevant problem with the script is that sometimes we dedicate more lines to unnecessary scenes but leave the important scenes unresolved. In the script briefing, we spend time skimming through the skip once again and looking at lines we need to discard.