Project Brief Two: Documentary proposal ideasÂ
Quick Word from the filmmaker: When choosing to be a part of ‘Documentary as Action’ I always wanted to make a documentary about those unsung heroes in the community making a real difference without wanting recognising or without being recognised. We see so many short glossy micro documentaries made about the great work of non-for-profit organisations promoting and inspiring others to join their campaign. This would be seen as a positive development, having interactive content on non-for-profit organisations websites to actually showcase the incredible work of these organisations and individuals. However if this content is not made in the right way the audience can become disconnected and desensitised to the stories, therefore it is imperative to create the content in the right way, emotionally involve the audience, bring together amazing stories, well told, aesthetically pleasing and more importantly in a different style to your typical stand alone talking heads documentary. As we have learnt in the early stages of ‘Documentary as Action’ there’s more ways than one to conduct an interview, film subjects and their environments in an engaging and visually pleasing way, with these different approaches in mind, my chosen non-for-profit’s micro documentaries won’t be as simplistic and mainstream as originally thought.
Project Brief Two Aims: This project starts to develop based on experiments and sketches with video and audio and the kind of project you want to pursue for your major work. You should be considering the organisation, group or participants you are going to work with in terms of form, aesthetics and representation.
PitchÂ
My brother was born with three missing fingers on his right hand, at the time there was no support for my brother which motivated and inspired my parents to create the Aussie Hands Foundation. In October 2000 almost one year after my brother was born the foundation had been formed, with a smaller member base only in Victoria at the time Aussie hands over the last 17 years has grown to be an Australian wide non-for-profit organisation. Children with similar hand anomalies for the first time were brought together, adults with hand differences mentored these children, parents, grand parents, great grandparents were comforted by the fact that there was support for their children and that there are more people out there similar to them, knowing their not alone is a powerful thing. My brother was astounded by the support for him and the amount of people with hand differences around the country, they made him stronger, told him there would be tough times but to be strong and to be proud of his hand difference would truly get him far in life. They were not wrong, my brother is an absolute inspiration, he endeavours now including going into a career where he will be predominantly using his hands in a trade related job.
For as long as I can remember I have can remember I have been going to annual picnics, concerts, fundraisers, motivational talks and meetings for Aussie Hands, I have mentored children helped set up events, be there for my brother, parents and other members and seen the organisation grow. I feel like I am a big part of this organisation and for all they have done for me in my development as a young man, I feel like I want to give something back using my skills I have acquired at university.
Therefore I am exciting to be working with Aussie Hands members creating new content for the Aussie Hands website to raise awareness about hand differences, attract more members, make the website more interactive and visually engaging and also to tell the incredible stories of some of Aussie Hands members who have risen above adversity to be inspirational leaders for Aussie Hands in the community today.
I wish to create several micro-documentaries to be displayed on the Aussie Hands website so now not only can visitors of the website read about these amazing members with hand differences they can also see their stories visually and hear from them directly about their amazing journeys. Unsung heroes deserve to be heard to inspire others and ensure that people who are alike are not alone.
My chosen Non-for-profit organisation: The Aussie Hands FoundationÂ
THE AUSSIE HANDS FOUNDATION IS COMMITTED TO:
⢠Supporting children and adults who have been born with a hand difference or have an acquired hand injury.
⢠Providing opportunities for networking and exchange of information.
⢠Supporting research initiatives focussing on congenital hand anomalies.
A BIT ABOUT AUSSIE HANDSÂ
Aussie Hands was founded in October 2000.
The Founder and Vice-President of the Foundation, Elizabeth Serpell (Michael’s Mother), talks about the beginnings:
When Elizabeth started the foundation, she had four goals in mind â the same guiding principles at the core of all the foundationâs activities today:
- to provide support, understanding and encouragement to parents, children, teenagers and adults with a hand difference
- to provide a forum for discussion for people with a hand difference
- to raise the awareness of hand differences in the community
- to provide a library of hand difference resource material.
Through Melbourneâs Royal Childrenâs Hospital Foundation and Murchoch Childrenâs Research Institute, Aussie Hands is currently liaising with leading Hand Surgeons to establish the Australian Hand Difference Register.
Funds towards establishing the register are needed to develop and maintain the data which will provide answers to some of these crucial questions:
- How many children are born with a hand difference?
- What is the cause of the hand difference?
- How prevalent is the condition?
Those with a hand difference and the people close to them have a strong connection to Aussie Hands and this makes it worthwhile to continue to grow the Foundation so that there is an understanding of hand differences, acceptance and support by the wider Australian community â which is important.
AN EXAMPLE OF THE INSPIRATIONAL STORIES ALREADY COVERED ON THE AUSSIE HANDS WEBSITE
DAVE’S STORYÂ
Dave at 6.
My name is Dave.
I am 6 years old and was born with a condition called âsymbrachydactylyâ. I have 3 middle fingers missing from my right hand, with a small thumb and little finger. When I was in my mumâs tummy my fingers didnât grow. The doctors are not sure why they didnât grow, and told my Mum and Dad that one in every 100,000 children are born with this condition.
When I was 10 months old, I had an operation at the Royal Childrenâs Hospital in Melbourne. Hand surgeons Chris Coombs and Phillip Richardson removed a bone from my middle toe on my right foot and fused it to the bone in my right thumb (lower bone insert in the right thumb). I cannot bend my right thumb like you can, but, I can still do lots of things anyway.
I could ride a bike without training wheels and push myself on the swing when I was 3, do all the buttons on my shirt when I was 4, and tie my own shoe laces when I was 5. I really enjoy hanging from monkey bars and blowing bubbles and balloons.
My Mum, Dad and brother are very proud of me.
These are my hands
Here Is Dave in 2014
Director & Writer – Romy Jean McCann
Published in the Moreland Leader, 12 Oct 2015
âHaving been bullied because he was different, Coburgâs Dave Serpell is making sure youngsters with the same affliction have a positive role model. The 16-year-old was born with two fingers on his right hand, but he has not let that stop him achievingâŚâ
AN EXAMPLE OF THE INSPIRATIONAL STORIES ALREADY COVERED ON THE AUSSIE HANDS WEBSITE FROM THE PARENTS PERSPECTIVE
My Child Has A Hand Difference
My ultrasounds did not pick up any abnormality. Immediately after Phoebeâs birth her condition was detected. Hospital staff were not particularly helpful â obstetrician and midwife had never seen it before and didnât really know what to say to us.
A paediatrician consulted my husband and I in the first hour after the birth and he was excellent. He diagnosed it straight away as Symbrachydactyly and was very positive and said that Phoebe could have some corrective surgery for the webbing which would have a good functional and cosmetic outcome. The paediatrician was also very reassuring that Phoebe would be able to manage tasks in life and would not be horribly adversely affected which was a big help in those first immediate hours after the birth. The paediatrician also confirmed that the cause was not genetic (a worry for me as I was an âolderâmother!) â he also stated that it was not hereditary and would not be passed on by Phoebe to subsequent generations. Not sure how we would have gone with someone with less knowledge and positivity?
The paediatrician immediately wrote us a referral to see a hand surgeon whom we visited at 6 weeks. In the interim I googled a few overseas hospital sites for medical information on how they might operate and what the results might look like.
When visiting the hand surgeon I found he was quite busy and I did not get a good first impression, however he did give us a copy of the Aussie Hands brochure at the time and suggested that we make contact with them as he had heard very positive feedback about the organisation.
We sent in our membership application to Aussie Hands. I received a very supportive phone call straight away (can still remember it in my head like it was yesterday!) which was a great introduction â not at all pushy if we didnât want to attend events but an open door for questions/moral support. It really just helped us a great deal to know that there was a Melbourne-based group that had so many kids (same age as Phoebe or a bit older) that had a hand difference. I feel like we are so fortunate to have lots of families ahead of us on the journey that I can chat to.
We returned to our GP for a new referral and I also asked Aussie Hands for other recommendations â coincidentally both our GP and Aussie Hands mentioned the same surgeon for Phoebe. We met him and were immediately reassured that we had found a great surgeon to place our trust in.
Aussie Hands Patron Kate Doughty
In September 2007, Kate was appointed as Patron of Aussie Hands.
Kate represents Aussie Hands at events and is a mentor and inspiration to our young members. Kate has a hand difference.
Kate knows no limits when it comes to adversity and achievement. She demonstrates an energetic, bright and enthusiastic character and has achieved more than others would in a lifetime. Kate is an elite athlete and Paralympian. She competed at Rio Paralympic Games 2016, placing 5th in triathlon. Prior to this Kate represented Australia for several years in the sport of Dressage, and represented Australia at the World Equestrian Games in Kentucky, USA 2010. Kate is a registered Psychologist and is passionate about helping others reach their full potential, whether it is in sport, career or personal goals. Kate is also a Motivational Speaker where she utilises her skills and experience to guide others to make informed decisions to achieve desired goals and outcomes. For more information, visit Kateâs website.
Previously made short version of Kate Doughty’s story (created by the Aussie Hands Foundation Inc)
FILMING (VISUALS) DIFFERENT TECHNIQUES WAY TO FILM STORY
STYLE ONE: GLITTERY & CHILDHOOD DREAMING
Young member
Plays with a tea set
Different toys, playing in their own little world, shows the little worlds set up, train set, little houses , shoes tied, tea set with little toys set up in a circle, horse comes to the child explores wild, wooded area, pointing child looks.(Stevie & the Sleepers Young Again)
Close ups of the hand doing tasks, tying up shoe laces, buttoning up jacket in the winter, putting on little beanie, carrying bear (toys) hands are shown but despite being different still able to have heaps of fun and not limited by their difference.
Hand related tasks are important to show, the intrigue on the difference but more importantly how the difference doesn’t deter not limit the young child’s ability to play, be young, be adventurous and have fun.
STYLE TWO: FINDING HOPE IN TOUGH TIMES
Older member between the ages of 18-35
The talking heads describe being born with their hand difference
Describes the hard shifts the struggles the hard fought battles to fit in, the difficulties which come associated with having hand difference
Builds up to a solution, support was found in AUSSIE HANDS
AUSSIE HANDS introduced what do they do, how have they benefitted the member on screen, in their own words possibly, or a spokesperson describing the impact the subject on screen has made the Aussie Hands the confidence they’ve received and the good things they’ve done as a member/volunteer/mentor at Aussie Hands
Positives of having a hand difference, new found love, how having a hand difference isn’t holding the member back, how well they are doing as a part of Aussie Hands and how they look on their disadvantage differently and now see it as an advantage.
STYLE THREE: DAY IN THE LIFE
We follow the member in a day in the life, normal routine, normal work schedule, normal day at school etc
But through this “normality” of the day shown doing seemingly normal tasks, the audience can see there is a hand difference but it doesn’t seem to effect the subject on screen.
They discuss their hand difference, pictures of when they were born, growing up etc what it was like.
Were things difficult were there any hardships, could you find support, did you feel isolated, did you get bullied, were you asked question, did you feel like you stood out, was growing up with a hand difference easy or hard?
The moment they met Aussie Hands, the moment everything changed there was support there, they helped me get to where I am today, they allowed me to be confident about my conditions and meet others in similar situations, taught me I was not alone, made me hungry to help others in similar or harder situations, I am committed and love Aussie Hands.
Show through a narrative voice instead of showing a sit down interview, if its a very personal story talking head may not be necessary but if they do feature talking heads they could be, parents, teachers, mentors, family, spouses, other members from Aussie Hands and doctors/surgeons professional hand surgeons etc
Compiling the Micro-Documentary
ABSTRACT THAT REPRESENTS SUBJECT MATTER IN MICRO DOCUMENTARY– Nature, Suburban streets, Offices, Hands, Playgrounds (Coburg) swinging
PRACTISE INTERVIEWS (VISUALLY ENGAGING) -TENNIS GPA -TEACHING WITH GARY -JULIE AT HOME LIFE (DAY IN THE LIFE – MEMBER OF AUSSIE HANDS) Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â -LIZZIE AUSSIE HANDS (OFFICE IN NATURAL ENVIRONMENT)
AUDIO THAT REPRESENTS SUBJECT MATTER IN MICRO DOCUMENTARY– Sound of nature, water, children laughing, a set up interview, Bells (school bells), childhood cot, toy squeaking sounds, suburban street scape sounds, trams, office scape, hospital ward noises.
(HOT TIPS đĽÂ AUDIO: Matching sound on Premiere Pro: Take a clapper match the two sound patterns, merger in premiere will find the same sound pattern. Make sure the recording device is on trim, once you’ve adjusted the buttons then record the record – record – stop – play to hear back recording) Shotgun microphone which is your directional microphone will record all the sound from a direction you want.)
INTERVIEW STYLES
Informal interviews – having the interviewer in the shot actually participating with the subjects talking to them casually and thats the interview
Heart of the Angel – interviewer is there with the lady doing her job clearing the tracks and she is talking to her as she can explain her method whilst she’s cleaning
Interviewers choosing to keep their pre-interview methodology in the interview “don’t be nervous, anything you object we can cut out”. Set up subject to interview other in vox pops, interviewers ask questions with a microphone and ask the unassuming subjects with audio equipment asking them “are you happy” CHRONICLE OF THE SUMMER (Film – form of documentary – first vox pops ever filmed)
Interview free flowing capturing an event live, the b-roll footage is the camera cutting away to other subjects, the actions on screen, and other event which are unfolding (spot fires), and as they walk around the interviewer/filmmaker goes from subject to subject getting random vox pops interviews.
Metal and Melancholy (1993) – Subject is fully participation – showing their method – showing their car – performance – different to sitting down with the subject.
Show and tell, you don’t hear the interviewer (Fernund Florida) it is him with his subject
Zidane Documentary – single match camera stays on him, personal portrait, actual interview is just in subtitles, music soundtrack and recorded sound of soccer match is prominent.
INTERVIEW AUDIO EXERCISE
With all the different modes of interview, I wanted to record a few interviews and discussions across the past few weeks and see whether I could find differences in interviews and whether they were effective in getting a point of discussion across and whether they could engage the audience. Three examples I have recorded is the audio version of the micro documentary of my Dad, More Than A Job: Teaching in Grade One. A longer interview with the interviewers questions and reactions left in the final cut, purposefully. A food podcast example which has been a long form project finally completed recently, discussing with an expert about how fast food has changed in reference to an article “How Junk Food Can End Obesity”. This interview is a mix of presenting a story, content then using the finding to ask questions and get the opinions of an expert. An expert opinion is important and I wanted practise with an expert before interview some surgeons, doctors and professionals in the field of hand anomalies and differences in the micro documentaries. Also the final audio was a recording after a radio show I did at SYN 90.7 we conducted a discussion about egg coffee in Vietnam after my recent ventures there, I was curious to see how a seemingly normal conversation could be recorded, how it could be relevant and how it could be engaging. Natural conversation plays an important roles in establishing characters in documentaries, that was a theme I wanted to explore in the final audio recording last week.
More Than A Job: Teaching in Grade One (documentary style)
A fascinating interview with a teacher of 30 plus years describing his experiences year in year out, how the industry has changed, the core values that still remain and how his passion for teaching has remained after so long.
Food Podcast Example – Being able to interview a subject with the aid of evidence and referencing (more journalistic style)
My recording is an extension on the idea established by the Atlantic magazineâs author David Freedman in his article âHow Junk Food Can End Obesityâ which explains making processed food healthier will be a key factor in the fight against obesity. I reference in my recording through investigation the way different fast food chains and food franchises are modifying the way their food is processed and the way they are presenting or not presenting healthier options so they appeal to the public.
I also delve into the debate that the fast food chains arenât to blame for the rise in obesity but instead it comes down to many factors including the personal choice of the individual, that parents play a huge role in what food options they introduce to their children, that people choose fast food over the healthier alternatives, that snacking contributes to obesity and that peer pressure can cause some to eat fast food over a healthier alternative.
I also look into the way McDonaldâs innovate their fast food and are slowly without the consumers knowing reducing serving sizes, displaying calories, reducing beverage sizes (particularly in the USA), using free range eggs and organic milk, introducing more salads and adding fresh fruit to itâs menus.
To conclude, I make the remark that fast food chains wonât single handedly stamp out obesity and that the individual has the power to change their weight; but fast food becoming healthier could end the temptation to eat unhealthy food as the options will be healthier.
Coffee, But With Egg And Cheese (open discussion with interview)
Get Cereal Tuesday’s on SYN 90.7 FM, is the show I present and produce for, often there is riveting discussion and this an example of that great discussion and comedy on a Tuesday morning.
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A HELPFUL RESOURCEÂ
Shooting a documentary style interview – video tutorial
“Today on The Slanted Lens, we will show you how to shoot a simple 2 camera profile interview piece with a talent on location. You can use this piece for company profiles, Kickstarter campaigns, corporate videos, documentary work, individual company profiling, etc. We will discuss the position of the cameras and lights, choosing the location, shooting B-roll and creating an outline and questions for the interview. I usually shoot with a crew of no more than 3 people. Many times I have done the interviews with just me and a sound person and it’s very possible to shoot these alone.” The Slanted Lens
FILMING EXPERIMENTS RELATING TO THE MICRO DOCUMENTARIES
Documentary As Action – Playground Sequence
These video sketches were experiments related to a playground, the playground in sections from the eyes of a younger observer, the equipment from high angles and abstract looks at the space.
As many of the subjects will be young adults and children with hand differences in the micro-documentary, therefore visual (b-roll) footage relating to the interview, those themes are important.
These exercises explore the world through the eyes of a younger person and with the micro-documentaries this perspective will be effective in the documentary as action miniature stories.
Documentary as Action – Breakfast Sequence
These video sketches were experiments related to a breakfast routine, the breakfast routine although seemingly simple is different from everyone and different from all aspects.
As many of the subjects will have hand differences in the micro-documentary, I want to explore how different or challenging a morning routine would be for those with hand differences and the beauty and intrigue in how they use their hands in a simple morning routine.
This exercise explores a morning routine which may be one of my focuses for a member with a hand difference. I want to normalise the routine but outline the differences and the possible challenges faced with their routines. How they have had to adapt and adjust. But for starters this was a good opportunity to explore a morning routine in an abstract manner, small rituals from different angles and perspectives.
Documentary as Action – Office Sequence
These video sketches were experiments related to the offices and engine room of my chosen non-for-profit organisation, the work of the members is inspirational but when interviewing the administration part of the organisation it is important to show the work that goes into running a non-for-profit.
As many of the subjects will have hand differences in the micro-documentary, I wanted to show how one of the key volunteers work with her hand difference and how she has adapted to doing everyday tasks with ease.
This exercise explores the office of my non-for-profit organisation, the office block is significant as many of the members work there and produce inspirational work. It is important to capture their work and what they stand for from different aspects and angles.
Documentary as Action – Movement SequenceÂ
These short pieces of footage were experiment shots with my Canon Compact Point and Shoot camera, not known for its video, can take some very good high quality footage.
I wanted to investigate movement in relationship to spaces and objects. How those factors interrelate in a small space and how to best capture this quick moving world in the most powerful way.
This will be important in the micro documentary as the camera will be taken to events run by the non for profit organisation I am following. Through these gatherings actually interacting with members seeing how they use their hand difference to their own advantage by participating in activities and interacting with other members who are similar to them, will help gauge how and what I film for the micro documentaries.
Their relationship to the space and place through movement will be an important aspect of the micro documentary series. Through filming in Vietnam I have learnt how to capture the fast moving world and slow it down, an aim for this upcoming series of micro documentaries.