After the pitching in class without any unnecessary artefacts (eg. slideshows), I took the presentation to a more direct approach which comes with the tradeoff of “flavourless” meaning if this was meant for investors this won’t go well. However, since I’m dealing with people who are not looking directly at wealth gain, I decided to take the more honest approach. I chose to not use a cheat-sheet that apparently everyone but me used it, so that I am more than a reading machine, because I mean if I am to read a block of texts I might as well just read it myself, hence there is no point of having a presentation (by the way, this also applies to slideshow with slide contain more than 20 words that are not quotes).
Usually I’m not one for long speech of something that could’ve been explained in a few sentences, so I’ll continue that “style” here. (eg. making Coke not so much of a potion made of 90% sugar, but a day-to-day drink)
That aside, the pitchforking was…well half successful and half unsuccessful, I made the main points fairly “clear”, but too scattered which creates a few clouds in the air due to not confident in presenting. The idea of using the sense of speed (Method) is delivered, however, the “Meaning” was not, the judges sees my works (I think) as not methodologically creative with a meaning that isn’t exactly clear to understand without textual/vocal explanations (hence failed attempt).
So the direction that were suggested are to “try to use/experiment different methods to potentially declare the meaning more effectively” which I added to the pervious post “M4A3 – The Pitch”. From that I figured that I was too tunnel vision for the subject which limited me into thinking that I have to time-laps everything for task 4 without realising that using difference might help me achieve my goal more clearly or purposefully.
After the pitching, I looked at others works (Especially those who came after me), and found something rather outstanding. Sometimes I see the judges puts more thoughts into their project then they do, which is ironic no matter how anyone look at it, specifically those ones that do the basic of basic works to just pass the subject/task. (No offence to them, but nevertheless it buggers me a ton).