The structure of our edit is really good and flows well. We decided to completely cut out the dialogue where Tristan talks about his miss diagnosis. We did not include any other information in regards to Tristan’s past illness’ so it felt out of place. Tristan gave us a lot of information but he also talked really faced and it is a lot to take in. Because of this we are now working on the pace of the edit and trying to add in some silence and moments to breathe.