I’ve found that over the course of making this Project Brief, we’ve been pushed to include some arguments from a more intellectual level. I’ve found that finding ideas about social media and mediums were fairly easy to find.  I think something that would be really insightful could also be confusing. In a bit of feedback towards myself, I’ve found that I tend to go off on a long typing spurt, and realise afterwards in reading it, it makes very little sense, grammatically and often in general. I think I need to proof read everything and to figure out whether or not it has a presence of intellectual ideas.

At some times whilst writing up my social media/the modern Internet section of our medium segment, I’ve found it difficult to incorporate Brian’s feedback to include different aspects of having varying ideas be prominent, such as Marshall McLuhan or Meyrowitz. But I feel as if they’re valuable ideas to think about and they’ve helped a fair bit in creating a viable analysis.