ALL OUR FEEDBACK
Positives
- great combination of different levels of audio
- the music
- descriptive with just words
- i really got a feel for the room, relaxing and smooth
- the story of the people
- interesting use of narrative and sound voice
- ending door shutting
- good use of diegetic and non digits sound, the faint music in the background was a good touch
- interesting addition of music, is it in your room?
- music is soft and delicate
- the script is smooth
- use of background music
- captured the essence of a bedroom
- visual sounds and music is nice
- the ending “its a room” is nice, the music soundtrack creates mood
- the concept was fun and depicted well
- the door closing at the end – clever, i like the guitar
- great script
Creative, open thinking
- use sounds in more a a specific constructed way to tell a story
- interesting music in background
- mood can be developed more
- briefs like a story (not narrative)
- better balance of voice and sound effects (not one overpowering the other)
- adjust level of sound
- reduce narrative
- provide less detail, make us wonder and notice the room rather than how the room makes you feel.
- what physically does your room provide you with
- what if you tried to make it less of a narrative
- try using just words
- listing without explicating in chronological order
- subjectivity – possibly focuses too much on personal stories
Emotional
- like the way they combine sound and voice over
- comfortable
- felt like i was in a relaxed and comfortable environment, as if i was in my own room
- calm
- interactive
- lazy
- relaxing
- soft
- informative
- secure and comforted
- experimental
- homely
Information
- can the bird sounds be a part of bedroom sounds
- what does it look like? colours, size, location
- perhaps play with audio
- other feelings
- hearing the sound the the room away from people
Problems
- difficult to hear dialogue sometimes and straining to hear meant that i sometimes missed stuff
- there wasn’t a list it was sentences
- voice over may nit be an ontography, a lot of human interaction
- descriptive – harder to relate to different agencies
- not all sounds are obvious
- maybe too informative
- less abstract
- can you use voiceover to tell a story
- narrating a story and giving perspective of the person living in the room
- background sound too loud at some points