When filming my individual exercise, I used my phone and an app, filmic pro, so that I could have greater control over my shots’ exposure, focal length and focus, which I would have been unable to do so if I used my standard camera app. Therefore, I was able to not only manipulate and develop my composition between the two shots, but also its aesthetic qualities.
In terms of composition, I think that my second shot was more successful. The first shot doesn’t consider the rule of thirds as well as the second shot did; as the large metal “QV” sign in the far right of the shot takes up a little bit too much space and doesn’t actually line up with the top right corner of the shot, an aspect I corrected second time around. The first shot also wasn’t level, evident by the buildings in the background not being parallel to the shot’s frame, making it seem less clean and intentional. The smaller “QV” stand in left of the shot, whilst still in the technically correct third of the image, seemed a bit low and obsolete in the first shot, compared to the second where it’s centred in its third, making its place in the shot seem much more intentional.
I also decided to play with different exposure and focus levels between the two shots. In this regard, I like elements of both shots. Whilst the first shot is rather underexposed, it really allows the fluorescent lighting within the shot to catch the audience’s attention. It also allows for the reflections of the glass I was shooting in front of to be more visible, creating a dream-like quality in the shot. On the other hand, I think that the second shot is a bit over-exposed and losses the dream life quality of the reflections in the glass, which I like about the first shot. However, I do like the more over-exposed shot as the fluorescent lighting looks a bit more blown out, which also provides a dream-like quality to the shot. I feel like I needed to take a final, third shot that finds a balance between the two.
I am very happy with the location that I chose to shoot the shot in. Despite originally wanting to avoid filming in front of the glass, I like the effect that it had on the shot, allowing me to capture the action in front and behind me, creating more points of interest. I also like the inclusion of a vanishing point in the middle right of the shot, as it creates some depth and dimension.