This week marked a significant milestone for our project as we presented our work and received valuable feedback from our tutor, classmates, and two guest evaluators. Their insights highlighted both strengths and areas needing improvement, guiding us towards refining our narrative and technical plans.
**Presentation and Feedback:**
Our presentation showcased the progress of our project, but it also revealed some challenges. The feedback pointed out that Adam and Josh’s characters were too similar, making it difficult to differentiate between them. Additionally, while some of our comedic ideas were well-received, others were not effectively conveyed. This critique was instrumental in helping us recognise the need for clearer character development and stronger narrative delivery.
**Script Refinement:**
Taking the feedback to heart, we immediately set to work on Wednesday to enhance our script. We developed more distinct backstories for Josh and Adam, giving them unique personalities and motivations. We also introduced new dialogues to better reflect their individual traits and to ensure clearer differentiation. Furthermore, we revised the final scene, set on a beach, to sharpen its comedic impact and narrative coherence.
**Equipment Preparation:**
Following the script adjustments, I consulted with our tutor, Bradley, about the equipment available at the university. Bradley provided excellent recommendations for the sound equipment that would best suit our filming style. With this information, I finalised our equipment list, which includes cameras, lenses, camera accessories, stabilisers, tripods, drones, lighting setups, and sound gear. This comprehensive list ensures that we are well-equipped for both the technical and creative demands of our shoot.
**Next Steps:**
We are now gearing up for our test day next Monday. This will involve visiting our shooting locations to assess any specific needs and conducting table readings to fine-tune our performance and dialogue. Additionally, we will create a detailed shot list to guide our filming process.
With these preparations in place, we feel confident and ready for our shooting days on Wednesday and Thursday. The test day will be crucial in ironing out any last-minute details and ensuring a smooth, efficient filming process.
Overall, Week 10 has been pivotal in refining our project and preparing us for the next steps. With enhanced characters, a polished script, and a well-prepared equipment plan, we are excited to bring our vision to life and deliver a compelling and humorous film.