A5- Studio Reflection

Consider in what ways you hope your final work engages its audience and communicates a key concern of the studio? Draw upon your experiences from attending the studio exhibition.

My final work, The Last Supper aims to engage the audience through its multitrack format allowing for a surprising listening experience throughout the 18 minute piece. Having multiple characters means the listener should be able to relate to at least one of them (despite all characters being slightly unbearable). The different ‘moments’ of Anna’s final dinner party each display a slice of her fateful night which hopefully makes it easier for audiences to maintain focus throughout, avoiding boredom or fatigue considering the absence of visual accompaniments. Furthermore, the ability for listeners to skip through or skip back to previous tracks allows for a level of interactivity. As Huwiler (2016) stated in A Narratology of Audio Art: Telling Stories by Sound, ‘The interfering listeners can actually influence the sequence of the different parts of the story from time to time, and thus they can take part in the storytelling to a certain degree, or at least they believe they can take part in it’(pg. 110). This was something Niamh and I wanted to explore in our Final piece. After talking to people who listened to The Last Supper at the studio showcase, I believe niamh and I accomplished that.

Outline the singular most successful and singular most problematic aspect of your process/finished work

The most problematic aspect of the finished work would be, in my opinion, the quality of voice acting. Considering time limits it became unfeasible for me and Niamh to hire voice actors. Fortunately, we were lucky enough to have friends to step in and contribute to our work. Whilst I am very grateful for their time and effort, I believe the final work would be of higher quality if we were able to use professionals. I also believe the listener would be able to immerse themselves more in the story, as some of the line deliveries sound a bit strange (breaking the fantasy a little bit). However, I thoroughly enjoyed recording Cam, Bella, Lexi and Jack as I haven’t laughed that hard in a while and it was a fun activity to do on a winter night. I am so grateful for their efforts. Despite this, the final work was completed in a timely manner and we were both proud of what we accomplished. This, for me, was the most successful aspect of this process. Having done group projects before in other studios, the fact that I was able to complete a fully fleshed out audio piece of 18 minutes is very impressive to me.

Imagine you are going to keep working on that media piece, what would be the core things you would want to improve and extend and why?

If I was to continue working on the concept of The Last Supper I would like to improve the story, more specifically, how the story was divided amongst the tracks. I believe that we could’ve made it more dramatic and really lent into the ‘slice of the night’ aspect of the piece. Ideally, each track would directly link to how Anna was murdered and really focus on the mystery at the heart of the story. However, niamh and I were always conscious of how to create an audio piece that made sense. As Ferrington (1993) quoted, ‘The audio designer recognizes the limits of the medium and strives to engage interaction between the sound stimulus and the listener’s interpretive ability (Zaza, 1991)’ (pg. 2). This is one of the reasons we opted for tracks that focused around dialogue as this would avoid confusing the audience. In a remake, I would probably be less worried about this and I would focus on creating textually interesting tracks like track 4. I think it would also be interesting to create visual accompaniments for the piece.

Outline one key thing you’ve learnt from your studio experience that you will take into your future thinking and practice

A key lesson I’ve taken from this studio would be the endless possibilities in creating an audio narrative and how sounds can impact storytelling more than I understood previously. I believe removing visual aspects from media creation pushes you to work more thoughtfully and creatively with audio. In future thinking and practice I will never ignore the affordances of audio. Furthermore, upon watching students work in other studios that were visually focussed, I couldn’t help but notice how much better their projects would be if the audio was as equally favoured as the visual. Within film, sound is often under-utilised, ‘Sound contributes significantly to the materiality of the image, despite its intangibility, fleshing out the movement of objects and bodies through increasingly fine detail’(Donaldson, 2017).

What’s one key takeaway about working collaboratively? Or, if your work was solely independent throughout this studio, what aspects do you think would have been improved and/or detrimented by working collaboratively?

Working collaboratively with Niamh was incredibly easy. A key takeaway for me is that creating something alongside another person is infinitely easier if you have a shared vision and are both passionate about making good work. Compared to other group projects I’ve been in, this creative process cannot be faulted. Another key takeaway for me is to always be open to suggestions as two minds is truly better than one when it comes to story making and storytelling.

Include at least 3 x references to readings from the course/individual research to support your reflection

Donaldson, L. F. (2017). Feeling and Filmmaking: The Design and Affect of Film Sound. The New Soundtrack, 7(1), 31–46. https://doi.org/10.3366/sound.2017.0095

Ferrington, G. (1994). Audio Design: Creating Multi-Sensory Images For the Mind. Journal of Visual Literacy, 14(1), 61–67. https://doi.org/10.1080/23796529.1994.11674490

Huwiler, Elke. (2016). A Narratology of Audio Art: Telling Stories by Sound. 10.1515/9783110472752-007.

A4: The Last Supper

Do you think your major work is effective as a media object/cultural product and if so, in what ways? How could similar work be improved/ what would you do differently if you were to make a similar work in the future?

I believe my major work, The Last Supper is effective as both a media object and a cultural artifact. Having written, produced and edited a completely original 18 minute long multitrack piece I believe Niamh and I should be proud of the work we submitted. By choosing to cut the story into separate tracks, the work is effective in capturing the audience’s attention and I could see listeners tuning in across different parts of the day to eventually solve the murder mystery. By basing our story around the lives of young people, The Last Supper mirrors the youth of now and will one day become (hopefully) a time capsule of what it was like to be 25 in 2025. Niamh and I hope that the audio narrative is painfully relatable and feels true to our audience and will in turn be an effective cultural document. More often than not, I begin with an idea I’m quite passionate about but I slowly lose steam as the project comes to fruition. If I could create this project again it would sound pretty different as I could use all the lessons I learnt along the way during this semester and the creative process. The main place I would work on would be the script. Through editing and listening to it over and over again I realised I would’ve liked to focus more on the mystery of Anna’s *murder* and lean into the camp and comedy (like seen in track 1- Death becomes her or track 4-4:20pm). 

 

  1. What was your personal contribution to the work? Please provide evidence, e.g. screenshots or documents of your work in progress. 

Throughout this project Niamh and I worked very closely, partly because we live together but mostly due to the shared passion for this project and the mutual desire to oversee each point of production. In saying this, each of us have strengths and weaknesses to which we respected throughout the making process. Having a background in illustration (and an obsession with procreate) I was in charge of the cover art for the CD and Soundcloud album. I also focused on the pre-production organisation, creating a google drive where we held all of our documents, work-in-progresses and inspiration.

Throughout this stage I also created a project timeline to hold us accountable and ensure we got this done efficiently and without stress. Niamh and I collaborated across the scriptwriting and editing, splitting up the work in half whilst helping each other out when needed.

  1. What worked well and what could’ve been improved about the collaborative process? 
  2. The collaborative process was very smooth and kink-free. I truly have nothing to complain about.

 

Did you learn any lessons that you can take to future collaborations? 

I learnt that I can be a bit of a control freak when working collaboratively, especially when the original concept was my idea. However, working with Niamh (someone I can talk very openly with) made this a bit easier. I feel it is very important to work with a team you can trust but to also have trust in them and understand that your idea is not the only good idea in the room. In future collaborations I will focus on good organisation and open communication. 

 

  1. What are some of the most important lessons about working with audio that you have learned in our studio? 

When working on audio that accompanies visuals, the audio tends to take the backseat. Whilst this might mean less work it also means a very powerful part of the work as a whole is incredibly underutilised. Building a strong soundscape and having clear, crisp dialogue can impact an audience’s reaction to the piece exponentially.  Take for example Girl V. Horse by Nicole Teeny. Sure, this podcast would be a great t.v show or film but having audio only forces the listener to hear every layered sound, creating their own personal visuals in their mind. I also learnt that audio is very delicate and takes skill to coordinate an even soundscape with a focus on balance. 

 

  1. Having had a focused period of time dedicated to working with audio, how do you think audio fits into your future as a creative worker? 

I chose this studio because I wanted to focus on audio to further enrich my creative pursuits in the future. I hate to admit it but previously, audio was something I would just throw in and focus on the bare necessities like syncing and volume. Engineering Audio Narratives has provided me with the knowledge and inspiration to ensure my future works are polished, both visual and audio aspects. 

 

  1. Where do you think audio fits into the future of media in general?

I see the future of audio evolving further away from radio as streaming becomes more popular and moving towards having an even larger internet presence. However, it will be interesting to see how it evolves alongside AI as we are already able to make any script a podcast, talk to AI celebrities and listen to AI made music. 

 

  1. Do you have any parting thoughts or comments?

This studio has instilled in me a greater understanding and appreciation of audio works and their production. I am very excited to transfer the skills I have acquired into future projects, be that audio only or audio-visual. I look forward to displaying The Last Supper at the exhibition as well as exploring the other audio pieces created by the class of Engineering Audio Narratives 2025!

 

ASSINGMENT 1 LINKS

SKETCH #3

https://www.mediafactory.org.au/jasmingould/2025/03/22/a-kid-in-cape-patterson-assignment-1/

SKETCH #2

https://www.mediafactory.org.au/jasmingould/2025/03/22/tony-the-fly-assignment-1/

A kid in Cape Patterson- Assignment 1

 

REFLECTION TRANSCRIPT

For our sketch in week three we were tasked with interviewing a classmate. I have been in the role of interviewer before in previous studios, so I felt quite comfortable. However, previously I have already known the story I want from someone. So, to have the interviewee decide on what story to tell me was challenging. This meant I had to create interview questions whilst trying to envision the angle or overarching tone of the piece.

During the pre-interview stage I was able to listen without pressure and Niamh was able to tell her story in the way that she felt best. Recording the interview didn’t go as smoothly. It felt quite awkward for both Niamh and I to record within school grounds and often spoke over the top of each other. From this I’ve learnt to make sure the person you are recording is completely finished what they’re saying. Even holding silence for 5 seconds too long might be useful in the future.

When I started editing the audio I decided to cut out my questions and build it around Niamh’s answers only. I found my questions weren’t that useful in guiding the story and if anything, they got in the way. If I could do this process again, I would record the pre interview and listen to it a few times and decide how I wanted this story to be told. Then when I wrote my interview questions, I could guide it a bit more.

This activity has imbued in me a new respect for interviewers and their ability to know when to ask questions and when to respond. For example, Louis Theroux’s podcast. He would obviously have questions to jump off of, but he can also build on what the person is saying. I also know now how easily one could take the interviewees responses and manipulate them to mean something completely different. I’ll definitely be a bit more sceptical.

 

REFERENCES

Windy Beach Waves.wav by uagadugu — https://freesound.org/s/199283/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Kids Voices with Natural Reverb by Cornwallis89 — https://freesound.org/s/244593/ — License: Creative Commons 0

10 Minutes Past by <a href=”https://app.sessions.blue/browse/track/307698″>Blue Dot Sessions</a>

Tony The Fly- assignment 1

 

 

REFLECTION TRANSCRIPT

This week we listened to three different audio pieces, focussing on the different styles of narration utilized by the makers. I would say I am most familiar with multiple narrators, as I tend to listen to podcasts with a more conversational tone. However, my biggest gripe with this style is that often, the two hosts sound too similar. This was definitely the case with Alex and PJ from Reply all. Despite the few moments of confusion, I found it very entertaining and kept my attention practically the whole time. Unfortunately, during the non-narrated podcast, ‘Sex Worker Diaries’ I struggled to stay actively listening. I believe this wouldn’t be the case if I had more background information or context for each of the speakers. Sarah Koenig’s podcast, Serial was definitely my favourite as I felt like she was speaking straight to me, and it was clear and easy to follow. For these reasons  I chose to create my sketch around a single Narrator, Tony the Fly.

Tony is a fictional character, talking directly to the audience about his ‘long’ life in New York city. Similar to Koenig’s audio piece ‘Serial’, my piece creates a sense of intimacy between the listener and narrator. The casual language and tone of my piece reminds me of a conversation between two friends. It was designed to feel like you were there with tony on the bustling streets, having a chat with him, not just a fly on the wall.

I am quite excited by the concept of this piece. And I think it has legs for something more polished to come out of it in the future. I would love to create an animation around it and turn it into a short film of sorts. However, the first thing I would change is the voice. Unfortunately for me I did not think I was suitable to voice over this sketch as I am not an American middle-aged man, and I am terrible at accents. So, I decided to try my luck with AI. I used Eleven Labs text to voice generator. This had its limitations, for one, there was no Italian mob boss voice. This was my first big hurdle. In the future I would love to hire a voice actor for this kind of audio narrative. I also think I can improve majorly with my editing and mixing skills, and I look forward to building these as the semester progresses.

 

REFERENCE LIST FOR Tony The Fly

Young man clearing throat by magicjoshua — https://freesound.org/s/704174/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Man Coughing by ckvoiceover — https://freesound.org/s/401334/ — License: Creative Commons 0

wasp_buzzing_around.wav by KevinHilt — https://freesound.org/s/392458/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Fly buzzing OWI.wav by nayahnaidoo — https://freesound.org/s/656042/ — License: Creative Commons 0

audi a4 b8 20tdi foley windscreen wiper medium speed dry stereom10.wav by Soundholder — https://freesound.org/s/425395/ — License: Attribution 3.0

Mosquitos.wav by mmutua — https://freesound.org/s/542163/ — License: Attribution NonCommercial 4.0

Baby Crying Slowly PE144001 by gumballworld — https://freesound.org/s/398552/ — License: Attribution NonCommercial 4.0

babycry1.flac by n2p5 — https://freesound.org/s/28100/ — License: Attribution 4.0

Wolf  Whistle.wav by deleted_user_4389770 — https://freesound.org/s/241258/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Splat1.wav by Shakedown_M — https://freesound.org/s/685205/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Car Speeding By Left to Right in Stereo by deleted_user_7146007 — https://freesound.org/s/383424/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Lighter Smoke.wav by Romeo_Kaleikau — https://freesound.org/s/622700/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Cigarette Drag by Storm_Crow — https://freesound.org/s/790482/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Car Horn_Irritated driver stuck in traffic.wav by wanaki — https://freesound.org/s/569613/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Fly buzz 1.wav by TeamEnFil — https://freesound.org/s/693933/ — License: Attribution 4.0

Police Siren and Sounds of City Train by sebnx — https://freesound.org/s/536172/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Improvisation on Major Scale – Saxophone (2) by emirdemirel — https://freesound.org/s/424916/ — License: Attribution 4.0

AMB_Int_Restaurant_Pizzeria_001.wav by conleec — https://freesound.org/s/149443/ — License: Creative Commons 0

Simulated seaweed slap B.wav by Timbre — https://freesound.org/s/98191/ — License: Attribution NonCommercial 4.0

A4: Submission

Final Artifact

Blog Post #1

Blog Post #2

Blog Post #3

 

Blog Post #4

Blog Post #4

1 x blog post considering the final artefact (500 words).  Imagine you are going to keep working on that media piece (e.g. to screen it somewhere else like a festival, or develop it into a different kind of work, and so on) – what would be the core things you would want to improve and extend and why?

  • I would love to extend the length of the film. I really wanted to reach 5 minutes but unfortunately with animation I just didn’t have enough time. I would love to keep working on this however I don’t think I have enough interview content to go off. Perhaps if it gets to the new year and I have
  • Some animation scenes are not to the same standard as others. I would love to put in as much time and energy into each one.
  • It would have been great foresight to put out feelers for a composer early in the process.

Blog Post #3

1 x blog post reflecting on representing the real world as part of a nonfiction media practice (500 words). Throughout semester, we’ve talked a little about Bill Nichols’ ‘Modes of Documentary’. How might aspect(s) of your work be described using Bill Nichols’ MODES? HINT – there may be more than one mode within your work!  

I will be honest, my work really only falls under the performative mode of Bill Nichols’ ‘Modes of Documentary’.

Blog Post #1

 

Working with a living, breathing, human participant (AKA a real person) in comparison to a character portrayed by an actor was a new experience for me. Whilst I was excited to interview my friends I got somewhat frustrated when they didn’t follow the script I had in my head. haha. Creating a documentary has been an eye opening experience in that I see now that it is hard to plan what your film is going to look like before the interviews. What I thought I would get was something vastly different to what I actually received. I have learnt that you must be flexible because real people are unpredictable.

If I were to complete a similar project in the future I don’t know if I would change much. I will admit, I did take the easier route by interviewing friends. Perhaps if I talked to a stranger, my sentiment would be different. Boynton (2016) said ‘love the people that you film’. I couldn’t have hated them if I tried. I do agree that to investigate a part of someone’s life you must love what they do. I also agree that, for the most part, people deserve empathy and compassion… unless you’re making a documentary about Taylor Swift or Hitler.

Within my ethics charter I quoted another student, Lauren Smith (2023), ‘if the person really hates a certain part of the film strongly consider deleting/re-filming it’. Although I agree with this statement quite strongly, I have to be honest. The though of deleting or re-animating a part of my film pains me. Not because I’m very attached to all of it, just because each shot took so much time. However, if you are not willing to do this, you shouldn’t create documentaries in the first place. 

I so wisely said at the beginning of this course that we must ‘Avoid pressuring the person into saying anything they may not have said usually’ (Gould, 2023). whilst I did not force anyone to say anything outright, I may have manipulated some of the discussions towards the end. Im not sure if this is bad or not. And I’m not sure of the ethical standing it has. I do know that I would make a killer producer for a trashy reality show. you know, the people behind the camera who manipulate the contestants into saying what they want them to say?

To conclude, perhaps I am better off writing characters. They are much more predictable. however, what’s the point in school if you don’t try something new. Besides, I should probably save all my dialogue manipulating skills for channel 7… or maybe 9. Which ever broadcasts Survivor.

 

Blog Post #2

 

Throughout my degree, more specifically within the media studios, there has been little opportunity to create something as a solo practitioner. Making something with a team is certainly easier in some ways but limits your scope as a creative (in my opinion). Only relying on yourself throughout every aspect of a short film pushes you to think holistically during the creative process. It also means that your idea must be strong enough. To clarify, you are not able to gain different perspectives from someone invested in the work. So, the idea must have enough flexibility and reach to culminate into a final work.

In order to be successful as a solo practitioner you are required to be dedicated to the final project. It makes life much harder if you are not passionate about what you are creating. As I said above, you can only rely on yourself to see the project through. So, in order to cross the finish line, one must manage their time adequately. This may be my biggest weakness when working on an assignment, both solo and in groups. I’d like to say I work best when under pressure but this isn’t 100% true. I definitely work fastest when under pressure. As I progress in my degree, I hope to further finesse my time management skills. Next time I work solo I hope I remember to be smart with my time. That way I can hopefully avoid some sleepless nights.

My strength lies in the concept stage. I am often overrun by ideas and get very excited when brainstorming a project. Through using animation and I was able to express my ideas in a seamless process. It was much easier than having an idea and wondering how to capture it through film. In this aspect working solo was very beneficial. I would’ve struggles to adequately explain what I wanted to another person if I was in a group. 

To conclude, I excelled in the idea making stage and felt working solo was to my benefit during that process. I enjoyed working solo due to the ability to do basically whatever I wanted. I did not need to compromise or dull my aesthetic down at the behest of another person. Which I loved. I let myself down when it came to time management. However, I know I was very ambitious with my approach to the task. I did miss having someone else to riff ideas off of. My housemates fulfilled that role somewhat. Although they may not have understood exactly what I was trying to do. The Kmart knickers part may have threw them off. Overall, working solo was a great experience and I look forward to doing it again.