Things to work on before final submission

• Stagger the elements if our film at the start (not having audio and visuals start all at once).
• Fix up the hook to make her dialogue more clear.
• Cue music at a certain point to make it stronger.
• Cover up the jump cuts.
• Hold some b-roll for a lot longer to give the audience time to process it.
• Disguise the audio when Rib knocks the lapel mic.
• Edit the archival footage so its not just an overlay.
• Fix up the archival footage so its not next to the interview shot, or at least hold it for longer.
• Double the duration of b-roll when Rib is talking about the colour green.
• Strengthen the ending.