Recording Place Log #13

Logline/Synopsis


Our group has changed some parts of logline and synopsis as part of final submission. As our original logline and synopsis were based on our mind, we have to change a little bit in order to illustrate the story clearly to the audiences. Here are the original version and revisited version.

Original Logline:Mr Huang’s passion for selling vegetables continues into his 27th year working at the Queen Victoria market, despite his advanced age.

Revisited:A vegetable stall in Melbourne’s bustling Queen Victoria Market is where a former teacher finds comfort and community in his advanced age.

Original Synopsis:Mr Huang is a man with an indomitable spirit. At the age of 76 he can be found with a cigarette on his lip and a pallet of produce in his wiry grasp. Originally from Guangdong, Mr Huang takes us through a day in the life of one who is beginning to feel the weight of his years.

Revisited:Mr Huang is a man with an indomitable spirit. At the age of 76 he can be found with a warm smile, delighting all who come to gaze upon the pallets of produce at wiry grasp. Originally from Guangdong, Mr Huang takes us through a day in the life of one who is beginning to feel the weight of his years?

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