Today, we showed our audio rough cut to Brain and he gave us some suggestions.

• More content in our audio essay.
• More academic resources.
• Make some change at the beginning.
• The form of audio essay can be more entertaining.

The format for our audio essay is radio show, hence, we did not include enough academic resources as we tried not to make the essay be boring. However, Brain suggested us to give more content and resources to make the essay be more professional. Discussing with the group, we decided to add one more segment at the end of the radio show to make it both professional and entertaining.