Defiantly a bit rough, not upset with the result but after the feedback from Adrian I should have defiantly spent a bit more time editing and making it tidy. I forgot to add my bibliography which is very embarrassing as well as my introduction should have included chapter 3 of Alien Phenomenology and why I am going to include it. I feel I am more confident in my writing but editing and introduction/conclusion defiantly needs work
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As with earlier work you’re a good writer. To become great spend more time crafting. Which means editing. Then as editing think about the piece as a whole and the relation of parts to the whole.