During week 11’s Tuesday class, we did mock presentations. The media classes that I have done before, we’ve only really done the presentation and not a mock, but I think this was really helpful because we got to refine our ideas and get to the best points in our presentation. It was also helpful to set up the presentation like a pitch to a panel of sponsors for a production company, allowing us to gain real industry experience in a class environment.
Things that I learnt with the feedback that Seth gave us was to not show the process of how we got footage or about logging because sponsors simply don’t need those logistics. When pitching to a panel of sponsors they are more interested in the story that we, the production company, is going to tell. We also got feedback to shorten text, as it is not productive to have a huge amount of text they aren’t able to read and therefore become uninterested. We as media people are more interested in visual aspects and images, therefore I learnt to blast images up to give a better understanding of the story visually, rather than just explaining it. Additionally, when presenting our story not to add negative points like our audio quality difficulty as they are potential sponsors, it would devalue our pitch.
All the feedback we got helped us inform our actual presentation on Thursday, to fit into the 5 minute time frame. We were able to simplify our script to the most important parts; the story and got feedback on it. When we showed the panel a preview of our edit, we were told that we could ‘beef’ it up with b-roll. When we add b-roll this could remove a lot of the ‘umm’s and ‘arrr’s which was especially helpful advice in the editing process because it made my edit smoother.
In regards to editing, it was my first time using premiere pro which I found very fiddly and had many features I didn’t understand. This made me seek other means of education through the linkedin courses and youtube to help me. The paper edit helped me in post production to whittle down my story to the main parts and I just rearranged sections on my timeline to best fit the story. I used the colour correcting tools to bring vibrancy to my work to reflect April’s style. Taking inspiration from our group’s Art Basel Inspiration video to inform the formation of my Melbourne soundscape. I found it difficult to correct the audio echo in the room. I also think that even though this was an individual edit, we all worked collaboratively to suggest to each other tools we could use to improve.
For next week, our group intends on finishing our individual edits for group feedback, do our video call reflection, pick our final edit and write our written justification.