• Describe one moment in the scene that you think works well, and why

I think our decision to change the ending was well thought of, The way the actor was created to seem deep and intense, with the plot-twist of them just looking up cat videos the whole time was funny I thought. I really liked our editing choice in the closing scene, and how it sort of became a  mini music video set to the Piano Cat theme.

• Describe one moment in the scene that you think doesn’t work, and why

I think the starting dialogue between the characters could have been more engaging/ relatable. Also faster cuts could have been used more sufficiently.

• Explain one thing you would do differently if you were to repeat this exercise

I would thought through the script a bit more and as a group; envisioned different ways the script could be made funnier and more natural. I would have found a better shooting area as the space we chose was quite tight and didn’t really make sense in conjunction with the script, and spent a bit more time improving the timing between cuts.