Two separate edits of a sequence of your work. Embed two different edits of a key sequence in your media work and write a 350-word reflection on the aims, strengths, and weaknesses of each.  If you are working in another medium (i.e.: a photo essay, photographs), you might like to explore two different layouts or formats for the work to be presented in.

After our first rough editing, I don’t think we have achieved our goals. In the first video, we edited so many the lens of Melbourne central because we want to show the whole process of their painting through a fast-moving way, but that let the audience felt tired when they watched it. And the first video lacks some transitional lenses, such as we can take some scenery of Melbourne and recording some background sounds like bird sounds. In addition, the inconsistency of subtitles and mouths is also a big problem. Especially after we watched other people’s videos, I think our videos lack rhythm. We haven’t switched the length of each video very well. So, in the final editing process, we had dealt with these issues one by one. We cut most of the Melbourne Center lenses and pieced together other street artists’ paintings to achieve a smooth effect. At the same time, an interview about visitors’ impressions and opinions of these creators came up. We focus on editing the lens of interviewers and street artists to ensure that the rhythm of the video is smooth. Then we recorded some scenery of Melbourne at different times and recorded some bird calls and old tram sounds and added them to the middle of the video for the transition. In terms of subtitles, we also made corresponding improvements to make the whole picture more harmonious. Moreover, after we’ve perfected many details, we’ve added background music to the promotional film to make the whole video more professional and persuasive. We hope that after editing and improving, again and again, we can through this video to publicize the graffiti culture of Melbourne to more people.