Week 5B: Roughcut Feedback

To do list:

Some scenes’ chromakey

Some lenses have a lot of noise because of the dim light

Delete meaningless shots (like open the door)

The scene needs a transition- directional blur (like in the alley scene)

Slow-motion (cigarette)

Light up the scene in the alley

Partial background virtualization

The ending shot is quite long

Pay attention to the frame composition and leave more space at the top

Pay attention to the synchronization of rhythm and action in the scene of toilet

Some of the blurry scenes confused the audience. They didn’t know whether it was about the plot or the technology problem. So, maybe we should make the artist drunk more obvious so that the audience can feel what lens wants to express.

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