week 11

we’ve got the feedback of our rough cut from Rohan Spong this week.

Here are some suggestions we need to fix:

  1. put her self-introduction voice-over in the dancing scene
  2. find no copyright music instead of HAVANA
  3. just use simple words as the title
  4. get rid of all fade effects, just us hard cut
  5. cut the repetition of her sentences like dreams…
  6. cut training part of the interview until 2:33
  7. bring the audio to her teaching part
  8. bring the 3:16 audio to 2:52
  9. 4:52 subtitle problems
  10. cut 7:29 audio: the explanation of Jazz, could put it at the beginning of the documentary
  11. cut wracking whole part
  12. can’t combine cross angle

 

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