I was not feeling well so Peter pulled the weight of the presentation (sorry Peter!). I have filmed the draft back in Week 11 on the two-sided conversation. I managed to send to Peter and a few points of problems I came across as I filmed it.
These were my presentation notes:
- could not do it in a proper room that we had planned out.
- decided to try a different approach.
- this is two sided conversations. it clearly shows two sides perspective
- how to make it more effective though? – i had thought of adding monologues /inside thoughts into the two parts.
- this was just a practice for having two first person perspective. because the room would be a bigger concept (coz bigger room, duh), walking around more, more actions.
- it was difficult to repeat the same movements we went through. (as you can see some of the missing hand gestures i n the film) – MY HAND WAS POINTING IN THE FIRST PERSON BUT WHEN ON THE OTHER PERSPECTIVE, MY HAND WAS ON THE TABLE- (that’s about close to a min already)
- THE GUY’S EYES WERE NOT ON ME FOR A PERIOD OF TIME BUT IN HIS PERSPECTIVE WAS ON ME! (NEED TO WORK ON TIMING AND CUES)
- for the next sketch, we plan to have the room setting filmed. good enough to be a first prototype. and see how we can improve on it from there.
- to do that WE NEED TO GET THE TIMING RIGHT, THE ACTIONS REPEATED, AND TRY AGAINNNN… (and maybe a more well thought out script)