Though I was not in attendance for this, I was updated by my group on how our draft presentation went. We presented the beginning of our artefact and the first ‘choice’ for our interactive YouTube video on noticing media in a person’s day to day life. We showed the main character make the choice between looking at his phone when he wakes up, or getting up and getting ready. Also linking them to the research we have on the choice.

The main feedback we received was we have almost gone from one extreme to the other with story and research. Now the artefact is focussing too much on research and is not creating a narrative. So now we are looking to keep the research on the same track, while adding a more compelling narrative around it.