After watching each other’s mini interview documentaries, we were asked to give advice (good and bad) about each person on our table.

On my table there was:

• Tash (http://www.mediafactory.org.au/natasha-khan/) who I believed had great composition of her shots and I especially liked her bike closeup footage and the transitions between each shot. Perhaps she could have included more footage of the photographer working with his camera but overall a great video!
• Aine (http://www.mediafactory.org.au/aine-hamilton/) who included great cutaways and footage of the lady singing with her group, the story line was clear aswell. One thing I noticed was that there was too much light in one shot, causing whiteness within the frame and on some of the women’s faces.
• Asha (http://www.mediafactory.org.au/asha-carrington/) who had great found footage to match her theme as well as great cutaways, environmental portrait shots and transitions. Perhaps she could have included photos of the lady back in the day when she was working.