So this is it, my final product.

• After showing Paul my draft I decided to add in a bass-y sound, it’s me sampling a broken cassette that emits a purely droney sound. I think it works with the what the film is trying to achieve.
• The colour grading took some time; it’s really my first time I’ve done it properly. Paul wanted to “blacks to be blacker” and the “whites whiter” and it made perfect sense. There’s some moments that are over-exposed, though I couldn’t fix them in while editing because hey, I shot with a camcorder.
• I like how natural every frame feels. It is not at all contrived (you may disagree), I gave Kerry a lot of freedom and he was a joy to work with.