So it is almost Week 5 and we finally have our story finalised completely. One reason we have been delaying with this is because our story have constantly been too complex. One thing I learnt thorough this planning process is that simple is the key. When your story is clear and simple, you can slowly add things in to spike it up, however when it is overflow, it will be really difficult to take things out.
Summarising our story in a few dot points:
– girl exploring the hidden world
– utopia vs dystopia
– girl’s grandfather doesn’t belong to the higher society
– overpopulation
– brainwashed