Dee’s Project Brief #3

Dee chose to represent her (super talented) older sister, Durratun Nashihin. I really appreciated the storytelling element through VoiceOver narrating over family kept photos.

I enjoyed that as the viewer I could literally see her transition from a young girl passionate about her sport and eventually achieving great success as the 2006 Olympics.

Some feedback: I would have liked to have seen some video added to your piece 🙂 gymnastics is a beautiful sport ! I thought the piano backing track worked really well. It was simple and did not distract too much from your sister’s narration, speaking of which I felt this convention was most effective in communicating her interesting story 🙂

 

Well done Dee !

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