With the rough cut workshop we presented one minute of our project’s progress to a panel of people who were going to give us constructive criticism for what we had already made so that we could produce the rest with what they had to say in mind to only make it a better overall project piece. it was nice knowing we only had to present one minute and it took the pressure off having to have everything ready so early.

We presented the beginning of the whole audio piece, this being the introduction to the radio show we were attempting to make for our project. the first minute consisted of radio hosts (Gigi and Chlo) introducing the theme of attention, celebrities on social media, and social media consumption in general. this part of the radio show was just a small chat that introduced the radio segment in general.

after showing the media we had, we got our feed back:

• add more external sounds: obviously this was going to come up we had only one minute out of the 8 to show, and we had previously planned to add many layers of external audio pieces to create some diversity from our voices.
• keep pace and enthusiasm in our voices (consistency): i think the issue was that we were reading a script off a computer as we were recording and we should try and make it more of a conversation and discussion to mimic the flow of real radios.