Post 1: ‘Structure and Meaning’ – McKee
Staring at the class before him, James Thompson shunned ‘narrative.’ “Forget it,” he exclaimed, “A short film should be a progression or a mood board of the filmmaker.”
The above statement (respectively made in week one’s second class) raised a thought provoking point that I had not yet considered – instead of compiling the events of a feature film into the five or so minutes of a short film, why not approach the task differently, say, as a small episode that exposes something?
This concept is complimented with McKee’s writing in ‘Structure and Meaning,’ where he touches upon Controlling Ideas or more clearly, the use of Theme. He reiterates that a story’s ultimate meaning is expressed through Aesthetic Emotion – the encounters of thought and feeling that harmonise what we know with what we feel. With this idea in mind, a short film need only illustrate a central premise that allows the audience to go on a journey of self-discovery for meaning.
I suppose from here, I aim to explore my initial stimulus of “Two Lovers. Violence. A Better Life,” by using Stanislavsky’s “Magic if…” According to McKee, asking myself hypothetical questions will contribute to the growth of the story that me, alongside my group members, are trying to create.
From this, I take that master storyteller’s never justify their work since films are not meant to be read as concrete reality – they are dramatisations of the world we live in.
It is what it is.
When in the process of creating my final short film, I personally need to remember that my work needs to be an extension of my attitude, which is quite reminiscent of Sofia Coppola’s filmography, since she relishes in tapping into the certain moods of youth.
General questions/topics/ideas for the future –
- What is the filmmaker’s encompassing purpose?
- Is it (my final work) ‘complete?’
- What does my ‘mood board’ say about the way that I see the world?
Post 2: ‘The Alphabet,’ David Lynch (1968)
In ‘The Journey of the Self,’ Rabiger introduces his piece by discussing that the source of stories should arise from the causes and effects in our own lives – a notion which is particularly true for David Lynch’s ‘The Alphabet’ (1968.) This partially animated experimental film was sparked by the niece of Lynch’s wife, who would regularly recite the alphabet in her sleep during nightmares. In a series of erratic and often disturbing quick shots, Lynch evokes a hellish mood, which, as stated in the above post, is precisely what a short film should be – an extension of the filmmaker’s emotions/experiences.
What I admire about Lynch is that he has a certain disregard for any clarity of meaning, rather, he takes the viewer on an investigative journey of their own perceptions, emotions and intuitions. Whilst watching ‘The Alphabet,’ it was difficult for me to not think of ‘Mulholland Drive’ (2001) and in turn, compare the progression of the two works. I remember watching Mulholland for the first time, turning my attention away from the film for five minutes then gazing back only to see that Naomi Watts had suddenly transformed from a wholesome country girl into a lesbian junkie.
I raise this point because that is the general feel that I received from ‘The Alphabet’ – one can not lose focus from Lynch’s pieces for even a moment without getting lost… not that employing your full attention will help you anyway.
This general sense of confusion that filmmakers imbed in their audiences is touched upon by Robert Drew in his article ‘Narration Can be a Killer.’ Drew determines that rationalising all film is in fact “anti-filmic and reductionist,” implying that a certain level of mystique is essential in the support of dramatic development.
A problem that I have regularly encountered in my pursuits of filmmaking have a lot to do with trying to explain too much, which follows a certain formulaic approach that I know I need to dismantle.
Post 3: ‘Small Deaths,’ Lynne Ramsay (1996)
Coming from a background in theatre, I often find pleasure in writing wordy and rhythmic screenplays that are much like Patrick Marber’s script for ‘Closer,’ (2004.) Having however watched Ramsay’s ‘Small Deaths,’ I pledge to make a conscious effort to experiment with dialogue usage.
What made her piece so special was indeed the fact that her sound design was largely experimental, employing non-diegetic sound to add depth to moments of stillness. The sounds of laughter and joyous screams emanating from children innocently playing contrasted to the ugly realities of the protagonist’s low socio-economic surroundings, creating a general mood of nostalgia for a time that is long gone. Alternative to having ‘normal’ dialogue, Ramsay chose to play specific disjointed voiceovers at various volumes whilst montages played on screen in an attempt to evoke a sense of memory – we don’t remember things exactly as they happened but in pieces that we glue together in order to make sense. She manifests a time and space that is not a logical moment but nonetheless helps the audience to gather what they know about the world.
Moreover, Ramsay’s work can relate to the term Louis Delluc coined “Photogenie,” which describes any aspect of things, beings or souls whose moral character is enhanced by film production. As discussed in class, shots from ‘Small Deaths’ can often be reminiscent of paintings, proving that a single frame can expose fragments of the story that dialogue cannot or perhaps should not.
Post 4: ‘Two Cars, One Night,’ Taika Waititi (2005)
Many of my favourite films take place over one evening, which is why I thoroughly enjoyed Waititi’s ‘Two Cars, One Night.’ I feel that especially with regards to the craft of short filmmaking, condensed narratives supply a sense of realness, allowing the film to read like an interesting episode in one’s life.
Waititi achieved what most filmmakers set out to do – turning an otherwise mundane moment in an individual’s life (e.g. waiting in a car) into something extraordinary and thought-provoking. For me personally, this was firstly so by way of the shots he employed. The montage of cuts pieced together of The Girl’s reflection in the rearview mirror painted a portrait of childish innocence meeting with the adult world. The somewhat seductive way her pillowy lips were framed, as well as her eyes, contrasted with the shots of her full face to represent the decent into ‘womanhood,’ which would have been occurring at her dear age of twelve. This was all the more highlighted with The Boy’s cheeky and quite humorous dialogue, proving a gap in age.
We have spoken a lot in class about short films being ‘complete,’ meaning that once the credits roll, one does not feel the need to see more or have the picture turned into a motion film. To reiterate again, it should be what it is. Waititi did not attempt to force miraculous coming of age moments into an eleven minute work, rather, he selected a single moment in time and dissected it, allowing us to draw upon our own meanings.
General ideas for the future –
- Make my final short film a one night occurence?
- Select a single event and dramatise it?