Clare and I worked hard to condense our Project 3 Presentation to a more clear and concise 5 minute one with visuals and after the panel I can honestly say I am very proud of us, we finished at 4 minutes 57 seconds, Clare came up with a neat phrase that summed up our theme of what we’re going to continue to do with dialectical montage in Vine:

Say more in less time.

Our panel feedback main points to consider are:

– Consider loops on Vine and editing as the works are made with cam-phones.

-A point was raised about potentially confusing the two concepts montage and collage.

– Thomas Sanders as Vine creator was mentioned as a reference point in regards to pre-production preparation.

**Late post: this is one of several draft posts I’d accidentally left un-posted for about a week**