After the pitch, I received feedback on my work, particularly on the pattern, colours, camera work and the contention behind the results of my experiments. The following dot points are a mix of some positive responses and also suggestions for the final project of Seeing the Unseen studio:

• The panel found the concept of noticing patterns existing in the natural and urban environment – this includes both the differentiating and similar patterns
• One of the positive responses from my work was that Hannah liked the last experiment – she mentioned that it was a good comparison between photos and videos, and the fact that I pointed out how one would expect a photo to move because they are placed next to a video
• The panel also said that white is an interesting colour to use and how I mentioned its rarity in nature – the colour white could be a catalyst for my final project
• Paul also discussed the way I moved the camera in the first experiment – he suggested that instead of constantly moving around, setting up a particular range and angle would further assist my way of noticing nature and the environment
• Essentially, I was faced with the question about my movement of the camera – am I trying to notice the movements from the environment or finding the movement from my own perspective?
• Some technical points about my camera work were also made – another suggestion from Paul was that instead of limiting myself to one angle and on shot, I could have the chance to pan the camera as long as you cut off the movement – from point A to point B, this could also give you another dimension of comparison and noticing. An example could be:

Rule: Make four films for each upcoming week, duplicating the cuts between the different Premiere files – the rule is that you must make a film every week in order to combine these cuts 

The dot points were all the points made during the pitch feedback and ideas contributed by the panel. I think the panel was very helpful in helping me achieve some ideas for the final task and added more onto the production of my creativity for Task Four. The panels’ feedback will definitely be credited for my final assignment! The evaluation from the panel was very productive and constructive, giving more ideas of how I should the tackle the fourth and final task of Seeing the Unseen studio.

Lyreca.