“firstly i really don’t think i understood the brief accurately , secondly i need to understand more what an ontography is “

 

so what I would’ve done is

• looked into how ontography’s can be communicated
• used perhaps lists to create the overarching narrative
• have less words perhaps on ad them in in short sections but only making up a small amount of the soundscape
• more layers of sound effects to really create an atmosphere
• ensure the levels of the video flow well and that the sound tone changes to fit the feel of the sound to showcase whats important
• given ourselves more time to edit and as a group look over and check
• allowing the group to communicate and adjust the video based on our thoughts as a group
• perhaps trial playing with the voice audio creating layering or different voice tones.

 

So Im really happy that we got to listen to other work and I think I now have a greater understand of what I need to do in the assessments. Im not regretting our first piece of work but will take all the information on board and make sure the next piece uses all our feedback to create a really interesting sound piece.