so our PB4 due date is catching up with us very fast, I am editing the video for our PB4 and I’m writing the narration sections which I have to film. Currently I’m struggling a bit with the cohesiveness of the video essay as it all appears quite segmented. As a rough cut I think we have the basic ideas there but I really think the narration is important to link it all together to make sense. Likewise some of the found footage I think is quite irrelevant at the moment, so Im thinking I might change that or ask the group for any ideas, because for some of our footage we need other visuals to keep the video stimulating and interesting. Unfortunately I’m not in today’s workshop so I’m having to upload the draft to our google drive which is taking a while so they can get feedback on the piece. Im hoping as well the group will give me notes on how to improve it and what to add in. As a group we need to meet up again soon so I can adjust the edit and show the group, and also so they can help me to make it look its best. Im feeling a bit of stress just because it hasn’t come together yet but hopefully it’ll all work out soon.