Great news, our rough cut of radio essay done!!!! Brain listen for it and give advise for us, he proposed that we now have an problem for our radio essay which is too directly to the theme, a little stiff. He suggested that we could make some changes at the beginning or we can add some things at the beginning, such as the dialogue that we are discussion our topic like we record some radio like ‘audience have power’ ‘Yes, i know’… somethings like that and then draw we had recorded content, which also makes our audio becomes more interesting than before, but also more natural to introduce the topic. So, we will do it next time we meet out of class.