Jennifer

Project Brief 3 – Fashion Killa

I think the best place Jennifer did was how she  processing emotions for the entire video, you can clearly feel the mood swings of his interviewees from the beginning happy to the later sentimental, turning point very clear. Another point I like her portrait is the link of each small part of video to the another video is very natural.

The only thing i feel she should improve is increase the resonated between interviewee and audience, i can see the different emotion or actions in the video, but just i can see but i cannot feel.

Even

Project Brief 3

The great things of Even’s work is she got a really clear idea of whole content of the video (her interviewee learning life in Melbourne), show the personality of the interviewee and let the audience know who is her interviewee by asking different kinds of questions.

One of small part of video was recorded in the outdoor, there are too many nosey in the background, she may can use more professional devices to record in the outdoor environment.

Hazel

Twin

I really like her angle of shot, really take me in the video. Her video is really funny and i really enjoy it !!! i think she just need to make the topic clearer, because i am not really get the main idea of the video (just show who is her interviewee?)