The pitch went well in my opinion in determining the aspects of our ideas that we have not thought of yet. I think technically the pitch was a great active discussion between us and the panel. I think that we benefited from the fact that we have a strong and definitive idea and comment of what we want to achieve. The main aspect of the project was to be able to receive constructive feedback and potentially apply it to our film. The feedback we received in particular about the fact that we are comparing burnt toast to being different in fashion I believe didn’t really help as I think the toast is more metaphorical rather than literal. The literal aspect is more to do with the cutting of her strings. However, the comment regarding the kitchen being more simple was something that made us think that we should dull down the set we have.

Another great piece of feedback we received was that we could potentially use a dancer to play our main protagonist not to dance but have a person that understands their body and is able to portray the doll like character we want to get across. Another idea that came from the feedback session is the idea of music that we are going to have. Although we haven’t thought about the sound a lot the information we got regarding the atmos sound being moved to potentially soft music or adding in sound effects of a domestic environment I think is something we could take on board as it will add a more relatable effect and will strengthen the contrast of the piece of clothing to the environment. Overall, the feedback was mostly helpful and has allowed us to think about parts of the film that we have not thought of yet or that we have not looked at in that way and will help us build a stronger story.