We presented our audio draft to one of the media practitioners named Catherine. After listening to the first few minutes, she old us that we delivered our lines with hesitance, and that we should have our lines more rehearsed and to make the points we make more precise, which I somewhat agreed with. However, we had decided to go for more of a radio talk show kind of feel. With that in mind, Catherine said that we could create an interesting dynamic of discussing our ideas and talking our essay whilst driving in the car, to give it a more talk show feel, and also create an interesting soundscape. Lastly, Catherine said that we should make the dymanic between the 3 of us known, with Qiming’s shy silence, and the age difference between Matt and I.

With this in mind, Matt, Qiming and I set out to create

• More precise ideas within individual audio recordings
• A audio recording done in the car, on the way to the vox pop
• An interesting dynamic between the 3 of us.