Tyler Perry was unable to make it to class today because he got kicked off a plane. Long story short – he was flying in complimentary business class, and because of this he was the first asked to leave when the plane filled up and they needed more space. However the show must go on, we still presented our draft to the class. Here is the feedback received:

  • Feedback received: Desire for more narrative and character motivation. Suggested that music be add to the video and a concrete way to show time passing. A back button would help audience return to begining of the video and try other choices.
  • Issue is keeping the video neutral – perhaps have it weigh out the ups and downs equally across both streams.