Briefly touching on how we fixed the continuity issue in exercise 8 we did in class last week, the resolution was to put an additional shot in-between the two as a means to make the scene flow a bit better and seperate the dialogue more so it seems less jarring.
In week 6 we got the opportunity to view the final edits of each piece which was extremely interesting to see the difference between the way the two were shot. Having not seen our 3 edits before, seeing how flexible the shots were to create three distinctively different pieces was fascinating. I’ve always been the type of person to have a script and shoot what was on it and nothing more without considering the editing flexibility I would have in experimenting with other shots on set.
In Thursdays class, we learnt more stuff about the camera such as white balance adjustment, which I found interesting however I can’t imagine it being something I would do religiously in the real world. I found the script we blocked out late in the class intriguing in trying and solve the backpack shot. One idea I had in my head was for her to drop the bag down beside her. That way we can have an over the shoulder shot of her, and as she bends down below the table surface, the camera tracks down with her (no tilt). She looks up to Colin to say her line, and then it cuts back to a shot of Colin looking down saying his line, then back to the previous shot, and the camera tracks her back up into her seat to the over the shoulder shot. I think this would flow nicely as you don’t loose that sense of space and position that was missing in the original.
Regarding the quote on how cinematography is the story and what is meant by this, I understand all other production elements to merge to form the story. A films story isn’t explicitly made apparent to the audience by sticking the script in front of the camera, it is slowly uncovered through visual cues only made possible with the production elements. Character dialogue and expression is commonly used to drive forward a narrative, but even this is an example of sound and acting which the audience must piece together. A story cannot be told in visual, film form without these elements, otherwise its just writing on paper.