I am proud of my mark but definitely want to speak face to face with Adrian, in order to reach a more comfortable level academically.Adrian’s main feedback was ‘Ok, comfortable with the theory so now you need to learn when to relax when describing and using it‘. I totally agree with this remark. Whilst writing the essay I found that I was able to discuss and understand the theory due to close reading of Bogost, however I could tell I wasn’t comfortable enough with OOO’s theory to really surpass its initial response and provide myself with a serendipitous new understanding. In a sense, I wanted an emotional experience where my metaphorical legs would come off the ground and fun into a new age reality full of Alice in Wonderland absurdities.