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This week I compiled my thoughts and ideas to create my own pitch to present at the end of the week. Up until now doing this exercise really helped me give a better idea of the direction that I am going for in my own documentary.

Finally reaching the end of the week it was a great opportunity to see everyone’s pitches and the feed back that was given to the assessors. The feed back was very interesting and a lot to learn from. A consistent problem from the majority of the pitches was not the idea but how it was going to be presented and structured in the final video.

Initially in the structure of my documentary, I was going to start with Ethan’s basketball career and transition into wrestling. However, the feedback that I was given, the assessor told me I should start with purely wrestling and then slowly bleed into basketball. In doing so it changes the dynamic of the story and makes it far more interesting than what I originally had.

This is the link to my Pitch Presentation:

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1eEoPYcEMPxDAOmMCadsIFbuq6GW9LuFKrIxzK8vMt4o