Today we were given time to edit our essays.

I’m so happy I had mine finished before today’s class so I could sit down with Adrian for feedback and so I could start editing the final.

These are my editing annotations.

The main thing that needed editing was some choice of words. For example, I stated that lists were a “simplistic” approach of organising ontography which isn’t true. It should be “simple” because simplistic implies that it should be more complex whereas simple is just how it is.

I also need to include a bibliography.

Now I can complete my final!!! Yay