I really enjoyed watching everyone’s films for Project Brief Three in the tutorial this week, but as always it was a little nerve racking having everyone watch my own work. I always find that I’m happy with my work when I’m watching it on my laptop but as soon as it’s on a larger screen I tend to pick out faults I didn’t notice before. Nevertheless it was great to gain inspiration from everyone else and to give and receive feedback.
We were broken up into groups by Rachel this time, a way to talk to some people in the class that we may not have before. Here’s some of the useful feedback I received from my group in regards to my work:
- Interesting subject
- Found footage worked well in terms of subject and aesthetic
- Audio track needed improving (voice over a little jumpy with the background noise)
I also provided feedback to the other members of my group
http://www.mediafactory.org.au/timothy-langdon/
http://youtu.be/Q9vcmZsIyPw
I liked Tim’s use of sound, especially in the live performance segment, but thought he could have extended the segment a little longer, or returned to it throughout the clip. I thought he used found footage really well also, particularly when the bands being mentioned related to the image being displayed.
http://www.mediafactory.org.au/daniel-orbach/
The audio in Daniel’s clip was really smooth, without any background noise and the music came in and out seamlessly. The found footage fit in well but I thought the shots of his brother could have done with a little variation.
http://www.mediafactory.org.au/alexander-jones/
I appreciated the humorous aspects of Sandy’s film and thought his humor could have been even used more throughout the clip. I also liked the shots filmed in the park, I thought they looked really nice. The audio seems a bit jumpy at times though.
http://www.mediafactory.org.au/jack-connor/
https://vimeo.com/125759935
I really like the aesthetic of Jac’s film, particularly that the environment seemed very suitable and in line with the aesthetic preferences of his subject. I think it would have been good to see more of the fashion show though, as only a snippet is seen.
