Short-story writing Reflection

Well, it was hard to get it started, honestly, since it is a short-story and there’s a limit of 800 words. I am not familiar with short-story writing concept since I’ve been writing with no word limit since secondary school, so I reread Lamb to the Slaughter. I liked the way how Roald Dahl gave so much space for me to imagine what was the husband trying to tell the wife, or if he managed to tell her, how would her reaction be like, or what if she had a different reaction when she had sensed what was coming up next, would there be a different ending. I thought that was the tip of writing a good short-story, so I tried using the same method.

I tried to picture the situations that had happened around me, but as soon as I started, I deleted it, because even I thought it was really ‘interesting’. So I thought of creating a situation that might happen, and if it really happens (though I really wish not), what am I going to do? What are the actions that I’m going to take and are the chances high for me to achieve my objectives in that situation? Will I get shaken up or will I be steady enough to get through all the obstacles? I wonder.

P.s. I came across this quote one day while surfing the net, and this is my inspiration to my short-story.

Love your parents. We are so busy growing up, but we often forget they are also growing old.

-Unknown-

 

1 Comment on Short-story writing Reflection

  1. Sandy
    March 15, 2016 at 1:15 pm (9 years ago)

    You’re story was a very good piece of writing and managed to convey powerful emotions felt by Lana with minimal background information and description. It was very well written and the descriptions of her actions and emotions while driving were excellent. My only issue is that the final paragraph seemed a bit out of place, outright explaining something which should have been clear to the reader anyway, if the information about the “good fate” like the no que at immigration had been at the start of the story the last paragraph could have been cut and the implication of God being cruel wouldn’t have needed to be explained. Other than that minor complaint I think it works perfectly as a (very) short story and excellently employed you used the principles from A Lamb to the Slaughter.

    – Sandy Jones

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