positives, problems, potential improvements…

Some feedback in class on my ‘shadow’ work :

#what was the immediate emotional response?

– association with pixar (YESSSS!!)

#problems, what do you think isn’t working ?

– The light is suddenly cut off which is a little jarring.

# What do u like about it? inspiration for something you could try in your own work?

– the shadow is very clear

– also it is visually appealing how the shadow fades into light

 

suggestions for how it could be done differently?

– try to do it in reverse and start with the source of the shadow (hmmmm interesting)

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