On my piece

Red – good feeling about Jen, strong sense of what she’s about

Black – Jen’s name could have been more obvious

Yellow – found footage suited really well — good to find footage of Cambodia

Green – different shot sizes could have made piece more visually interesting

I gave green hat feedback to Jen. I thought her piece was outstanding but it would have been interesting to see the negative side of Amitoze’s visual impairment. The positive tone was really strong and added a lot to her piece but if she’d chosen to explore the other side I would have been curious to see the result.